Cel Artwork.... Again

Haven9270 · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Aug 03, 2004 Posts: 244

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/56452772/

Yes there are minor issues with the anatomy (the arms are very awkward), shading inconsistencies (I went GYA! but was too lazy to make changes),
and color choices (I especially am not satisfied with the blues).

But I hope you like it^^

UPDATE (06/07/07):

HERE'S SOME MORE:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/56808804/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57024598/
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Xristyan · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:03 am Post subject:

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aside from the arm being a bit erm.. not the same size i don't see that much wrong with this picture...

for those with high standards i guess.. but man... i can't even create something remotely close to this... Confused

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onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

I think the arm is fine, just not shaded right, or you used too much definition on where the muscle of the back arm connects to the elbow joint. I'm not sure what "cell shading" really is, but I guess it had something to do with that.

I may not be that good of an artist, but if you give the pose a little more of a bend and a curve for a nicer rhythmy dynamic effect, it'll be awesome.

*edit*
actually, yeah, you're right, that arm is pretty weird xD
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Haven9270 · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Aug 03, 2004 Posts: 244

Thanks^^
More coming this two weeks^^

UPDATE (06/07/07):

HERE'S SOME MORE:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/56808804/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57024598/

I hope you like it^^
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"please let me work"

- Osamu Tezuka

onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

Nice nice!

The mech is very nicely detailed, and shiny X_X

Something is weird about the girl though. But I like her sword xD
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