my first pic

Kaijiin · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 6:09 am Post subject: my first pic

hi i'm new
and here si my art i put some watercolor on it, i made this to be the cover of a story i'm working on

http://www.deviantart.com/view/12820620/

what you think?

chingu · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jun 27, 2004 Posts: 349

Don't know what your story is about, but if it's kind of dark in nature, then the pic definitely works. Maybe you can create a kind of dark "atmosphere" or aura around that creature you've got hovering behind the girl to better emphasize them both, though. And the girl, is her eye covered with something other than her hair?

Overall, it's a nice pic.

Kaijiin · Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 9:02 am Post subject:

chingu · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jun 27, 2004 Posts: 349

OroSama · newbie! Joined: Dec 07, 2004 Posts: 19

nice

Riyuma · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Dec 08, 2004 Posts: 51

pretty good

amd · newbie! Joined: Dec 06, 2004 Posts: 16 Location: New York

Can that shadow thing howering above the girl be sort of her inner persona, or is it a completely sperate character? Either way it has something to it, nice work.

Kaijiin · Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 5:15 am Post subject:

moonlily · newbie! Joined: Dec 09, 2004 Posts: 12

I love it~

but when i first saw the guy in the back, my first thought was "huh, teletubbies?" or something..

overall, it's very nice..

Kaijiin · Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 9:18 am Post subject:

moonlily · newbie! Joined: Dec 09, 2004 Posts: 12

ZoXArkXoZ · Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 5:50 pm Post subject:

heh i think that's pretty cool. at first i was thinking oo the attack of ur shadow Shocked

. Kinda Peter Panish eh Wink

. I like the image. It's original and the characters are drawn well. Post more when u can Very Happy

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Kaijiin · Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 9:31 pm Post subject:

Hato · newbie! Joined: Dec 08, 2004 Posts: 3

wow... that's pretty good Smile

kamui032 · Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 10:56 am Post subject:

Wow, thats pretty stylish.