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Heinster
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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:27 am Post subject: My own open source comic/manga project (preview request) |
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I'm working on a story which I roughly drawn out in storyboard style the first 3 chapters (48 pages each).... And am working on part 25 roughly written.....
Especially part one is roughly drawn but try it and feel free too comment... Compliments are nice, but usefull critique is more welcome.....
Use http://www.geocities.com/davidayton/CDisplay for reading the comics (don't unpack) and remember it's basicly about the story and not the art, my current lvl is not up to the task yet.... You can read it without the program ofcourse....
part1:http://www.zshare.net/download/2408543832206b/
part2:http://www.zshare.net/download/22948323f24ea0/
part3:http://www.zshare.net/download/harrytxt3-zip.html
How the characters look in my mind right now... But don't have the skills to draw them in all kinds of poses.... yet...
Harry
[img:467:800:434e39e4eb]http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/Heinster/harry2007.jpg[/img:434e39e4eb]
Sam
[IMG:600:603:434e39e4eb]http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/Heinster/sam.jpg[/img:434e39e4eb]
Jalu
[IMG:600:739:434e39e4eb]http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/Heinster/jalu.jpg[/img:434e39e4eb]
I'm open to other peoples suggestions in story, art and stuff.... So if you think you can and want to contribute in anyway you think you can that would be very welcome.... As for now especially commenting is very apreciated for this moment.....
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Redmoon96
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| Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:38 am Post subject: |
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that is a great drawing! what i suggest you do is try to keep the characters more simple (like you said you would do lol) , and also i got a question: whats with the apple? lol.
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Heinster
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| Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:42 am Post subject: |
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Well first I'm trying to finish the story.... After that I will have another look at the characters  .... The apple? That's just for fun |
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REC
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Nice impression on the readers....This art is nice....although it doesn't have a single japanese element in it.........since I am a fan of Japanese art.....
Redmoon96, you should learn from him how to draw simple and basic characters like him.......hope you are not angry....
The character may look simple but anatomy wise, it looks quite correct.....
I have nothing to critique....but I have to say a good drawing....
Can't wait to see your future works.....Welcome to the site.....!!
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Heinster
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| Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:33 am Post subject: |
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| REC wrote: |
Nice impression on the readers....This art is nice....although it doesn't have a single japanese element in it.........since I am a fan of Japanese art.....
Can't wait to see your future works.....Welcome to the site.....!! |
You tell that to the people who are not fammiliar to anime/manga and japanese stuff... Most people throw it directly under "japanese"... So what you are saying sounds quite funny to me (in a not ridiciouless way). The story and characters have quite alot of manga influences and with 3300 episodes of anime I concider my self a small fan too. But I'm trying to mix things I like so it's not pure european, oriental nor american....
But since my art style is way from finished for this story and it's quite under the lvl it should be it's not a real issue yet what people think of it..... So I hope you also might wanna comment on the story that would be awesome...
But thanks so far.... |
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Heinster
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| Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:15 am Post subject: |
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Since I'm done with roughly writing the story (story ends at issue 4 I started doing some character design, I hope it gives a better view of the story in artstyle |
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