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bakanekonei
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 Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 2:27 am Post subject: nami from one piece |
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title, yup. crits? besides the shoulder, i know it's messed, i don' need to hear it.
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Yebyosh
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| Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 3:55 am Post subject: |
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I shall assume you know what is wrong with her left shoider and I will forgo talking about that.
There is something wrong with the crown of her head... It seems like the left part of her head is higher than the right. How should I put this... If we view her directly from her front, rather than a rounded egg, we get a pointed egg tipped to the left. Eh... I am uncertain if I was clear...
The ears also seem small for the head and face.
The shading is good, looking like the some of the works of those CGed graphics "human anatomy" professional artists. |
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AlDim
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| Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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| Also the eyes aren't quite even and the neck's shading seems a bit weird, almost as if it is flat. |
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HyDrA
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Joined: Jun 14, 2004
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 5:59 pm Post subject: |
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| Why is there a [x] where the picture should be!?!?!?! noooo!!.... |
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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| i know i know, this whole thing was a big mistake lol. i have another for this contest thankfully. |
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adventchildren
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| Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 12:07 pm Post subject: ... |
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| it is pretty good but the shoulders are really totally messed up there |
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seveneternal
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| Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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The tip of the ear needs to be a bit higher or at level with the eyes. The eyes don't seem very level either...
The heart painting (?) seems to be facing forward. I think it should be more of a 3/4...
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SSJGohan07
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Joined: Dec 25, 2004
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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| its ok... not too bad of an effort. everyone else seems to have pointed out ur mistakes so i wont. nice effort |
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leonhartgoh
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 8:14 am Post subject: |
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*sniff sniff.....such great effort.......
Sooooryy but I need to be honest, the girl looks kinda eeeky, but....I liek the colour... makes me forget about the picture, but then.....the girl seems outta shape, like what KYOU looked like during the last few eps of fruits basket......
Gomen! ><
You seem to be able to colour very well! |
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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| leonhartgoh wrote: |
*sniff sniff.....such great effort.......
Sooooryy but I need to be honest, the girl looks kinda eeeky, but....I liek the colour... makes me forget about the picture, but then.....the girl seems outta shape, like what KYOU looked like during the last few eps of fruits basket......
Gomen! ><
You seem to be able to colour very well! |
yeah i know she's scary looking. this was for a contest, so that's why i recolored it and submitted that version also lol. it changed very very much from the original drawing. |
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