i call her red

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

yup.lessee......took about 1 hour for the drawing, then 5 hours for the color. crit all yah guys want. this picture here is the result of books i got for christmas.....i got a really neato anatomy book and a really cool artbook with many great inspirations. they blow my mind, i'll scan and post some soon.

oh yeah, the background is supposed to be very minimalistic...keep that in mind.

kenshin777 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78

ummm her right boob is REALLY kinda "falling" out over the rest of her clothes and i think it it's a little over done ... and her right hand looks a bit strange as well ... other than that i really like it ^^

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

her right hand? the one that is down? it is only a few fingers falling out of her sleeve.

juhn_ak · newbie! Joined: Dec 26, 2004 Posts: 10

Yebyosh · Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:44 pm Post subject:

The right breast seems pretty fine to me. Women have various kinds of breasts, saggy ones, firm ones, pert ones, etc. Sometimes one breast can even be different from the other, e.g the right being saggy but the left being firm.

The right hand though is troubling to me. I can pinpoint the problem as the fingers being too long and are growing as they 'leave the hand', i.e. the finger tips are bigger than the base of the fingers.

While the close up of her face is good, I feel that the zoomed out version had a problem with that lip ring(?). It is too distinct in the zoomed out view, perhaps making it softer for the the zoomed out view would be better.

Other than that, very fine work there, Not just an Idiotic Cat Razz

A nice figure ( though I think slimming the bulge of the thighs could make it better ) coupled with the huge cat-like eyes make this an interesting piece of work.

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

yep that one of my main things, my style is so cartoony, and half the time i can't keep from drawing pudgy stubby fingers. yup, it's a lip ring, like mine. and her thighs are beautiful...thats done that way for personal reasons *nods*

thankz for your crit yebby ^____^

VasH83 · Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 6:42 am Post subject:

Hee nice drawing

the first time i saw her i thought it whas mary jane from spiderman Very Happy

leonhartgoh · newbie! Joined: Dec 12, 2004 Posts: 49

its actually a nice try. ....actually its a rather good beginner's art Smile

oops....I hope u don't mind me categorizing you as a beginner, :/

I like the colour, the right hand............that's what botehrs me the most

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

spermbank-tycoon · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:13 am Post subject:

Pro, or you had the help of a drawing hack. hacker.

Awesome picture btw.
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ChaoticZaeon · newbie! Joined: Dec 30, 2004 Posts: 30

I think the right arm forearm is a tad long.

atikiN · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 2:15 pm Post subject:

91KaGeBuShIn · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 55

The things that I notice:
the boob thing...its like an orange in her shirt...
and her right eye seems kind or strange on the zoom in
all the rest is A-W-E-S-O-M-E Laughing

VasH83 · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 2:56 pm Post subject: Re: i call her red

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