Naruto and 666Satan

VasH83 · Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:11 pm Post subject: Naruto and 666Satan

this are naruto and jio.

I think it would be nice to see a manga where the both of them working to together.

sorry but i am not a photoshop creator (at least not yet)

hope you like my drawing.

kenshin777 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78

you can tell that you do have some talent you just have some proportion and placement issues ... like where different things go on the face and what-not ...

but if you could fix that i think it would look nice ^^

VasH83 · Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:22 pm Post subject:

thanks kenshin777

can you tell me or someone what i did wrong.

i would like to know my problems i just copied these twoo from the manga's and edit some parts.

but when i make one from nothing then I have almost same the problems.

DrJackal · Jikan Samurai Joined: Mar 14, 2004 Posts: 979

Hmmm the left guy head is too small and his neck is too big and you can't see his left arm properly even though it's meant to be in the back.

kramxel · newbie! Joined: Nov 04, 2004 Posts: 12

according to my friend, who in my opinion is really good at drawing, he says that inorder to learn to draw better he bought a few human anatomy books, and he also got one of those wooden pod men. i post a pic he drew later to show u.

VasH83 · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 5:03 am Post subject:

bo1nkers · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 02, 2005 Posts: 51

naruto got big O.O

naruto:hair doesnt make sence, neck too big, the left arm need more work with the clothes, Right foot i love it very nice job Very Happy

the other kid: pants need more strech (clothe issue), looks like his left foot is kinda in instead of out, the bone thingy of the left leg is kinda sticking out so it doesnt s\fit his weight, if there are muscles showing out of his right are there should be some muscles pumped out of this legs ( the roll of wat ever is skin-tight so it'll have to have like a line showing that he has some muscles on his legs), ears need to be more perspective, and the colored paper thats going around everywhere i cant make out of it's direction so u'll need to cut out some of the shades and add a bit more work looks like the paper is getting wide then getting smal then wide then small and so it looks really weird, set it's withe (idk something like that)

overall: not bad not bad

aSagi · Conscript Joined: Dec 06, 2004 Posts: 131

ok...you've got talent...but you needa work on proportions. Naruto, for one, looked like he'd put on some weight, no offense. as for the other guy, Jio, is it? he looks great...has a nice pose and all *the way you did the scarf was awesome*, but the hand...the thumb cannot bend all the way up to that level, and the remaining four fingers should vary in size and length, and they look small, too, for him.
anyway, great job, keep up the good work~!! Wink