Ichigo100% fanart - Toujou Aya

Guest · Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 4:57 am Post subject: Ichigo100% fanart - Toujou Aya

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ed0kun · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71

yea thats my work wasnt logged in posting it o.o

dasb · newbie! Joined: Mar 31, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: Portugal

it doesn´t look like toujo but I think it's good
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pinkard · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304

gah humongous ava! X_x;;;;

any who i think its a very nice aya keep it up . you may wanna level out the eyes they seema bit slanted?

t1uper · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 21, 2005 Posts: 52

okay drawing, but doesn't look like aya at all

IchitakaSeto · newbie! Joined: Oct 07, 2004 Posts: 7

Doesnt look at aya at all, but its still good though

doujo · Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 9:07 pm Post subject:

I can see some Aya's traits! (like the hairs) but I won't repeat what the others say, cuz now I guess you know it Wink

Your drawing is really good. Maybe if you shortened the face, it would get better. The distance between the lips and the chin is too short as well. Enlarge a bit the shoulders too, she looks so small! Other wise, the eyes are really well done, I like your style. The nose is okay too, maybe you should put it a bit higher so the mouth could get higher as well.
I hope you'll do more. Your skills are good, I'm pretty sure you'll get even better if you practice more! You know, even I got some problems with proportions... I know them quite well though it seems like I can't draw it properly! lol. Do more! ^^

ed0kun · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71

lol ^_^ thanks for the comments all

yeah it doesnt really look like her to me too
the pic got a bit distorted cuz of the cellphone angle so her shoulders look small n her head looks bigger Very Happy

but yea ill have some more stuff later

LiangZzZ · Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 10:43 pm Post subject:

try to improve on her face and shoulders and it will look better... nice job!

azndrgn · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 20, 2005 Posts: 93

not bad work still needs more work on the size of the face still

kevinn · Daimyo Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1596 Location: penang

althogh it doesn't looklike aya to me, but i think it is a prettygood art.... anyway nice drawing it... Wink

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t3hlargo · newbie! Joined: Apr 02, 2005 Posts: 12

doesn't really look like toujo but good job XD
i can't even do half as good TT

dasthegreen · Naginata Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 505

doesnt really look like toujo but i can see her in there a litlte bit. dam good drawing anyway though.

Serenity · newbie! Joined: Mar 13, 2005 Posts: 15

It doesn't reallt look like Aya...but still it's pretty good

yeeunit123 · newbie! Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 12

its a very well done drawing, but you should change her experession