male study

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

i don't do guys very often, i need crits on his anatomy. be nice, i haven't done this much.

5 hours in photoshop

Yebyosh · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 12:24 am Post subject:

The body looks good but the arms ( biceps & triceps ) seem too big for it. The neck and the 'wings' ( deltoids? The region above the shoulders ) seems to be stretched too much vertically. The head seems too small for that neck. While I find the chin and nose to be really well drawn, the ears and eyes seem incompatible with them.

Hannafu-Chan · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 3:49 am Post subject:

I think its great Neko! I do think you need to sort the neck, though...
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VasH83 · Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 5:14 am Post subject:

again busy in the new year i see

it looks good but Yebyosh is richt about his arms as I can see the left arm is to thick

but its a good drawing

bo1nkers · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 02, 2005 Posts: 51

yeah the left arm look too blukky but very very nice its so good but he has too much chest hair and a long train Razz

kenshin777 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78

oh ... i would say that the pec's are too small ... and his abs ... look like they stick out a bit too much ... but other than that a valiant effort ^-^

LoneWolf325 · Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 1:02 pm Post subject:

I don't see any problems, really, aside from the left shoulder looks a bit large. I'm probably imagining it.
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Riyuma · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Dec 08, 2004 Posts: 51

everything looks good xcept the neck looks a bit too stretchy

keep up the good work

gundamwranma · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jan 02, 2005 Posts: 56

the realism is good but you stretched his neck too far.. Smile

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

yeah, is neck is off but it's because i should have made it thicker/straighter

WorthTheWait · Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 10:22 am Post subject:

I think it looks great as is! When ya think about it, looking at a person in real life and taking a picture at times when someone tilts their head just rite it looks as if it may be streched and the arm could be just turn abit.
I like the colored spiked hair. Adds flavor and flare to the guy. Wonderful job. Keep it up. I wonder how long it took you to complete this.
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AlDim · Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 5:35 pm Post subject:

There are a lot of problems:
- the joining between his right arm and the body is very awkward;
- his chest muscles are tiny in comparison to his arms;
- his neck is kinda thin, too long, twisted a bit awkwardly, and his adam's apple is missing altogether;
- the shape of his nipples is... uh... quite strange;
- the triceps is wrong. It does not extend as far down as the biceps;
- his shoulders aren't too big but look a bit awkward because of the shading (especially his right one), as if they are protruding forward;
- oh, and he looks knda gay with those girly eyes.

gnownad · newbie! Joined: Jun 14, 2004 Posts: 26 Location: London

His hair's cool, but yeah the neck is kinda similar to a giraffe lol... Mr. Green

And his eyes r dodgy... great work on the hair though! personally I would slim down the arms- they seem too thick for that sorta person.... Mr. Green

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bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

AlDim · Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 9:44 pm Post subject:

Well excuse me for having a hernia surgery just about the time when I had to be here to give prompt criticism to your pic. I am deeply saddened by the utter annoyance it caused you to get my comments late; look at me, I'm crying -> Crying or Very sad

Anyway, quite a few things I said weren't mentioned before my post. If you don't want my "crit" then fine, I will not comment on your art again. Rolling Eyes

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