Quick sketchy ~ wuts wrong with it?

onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

i was bored out of mi mind at mi cousin's house, so i started sketching... and YAY, they had a scanner!

newayz, the more i look at this sketch, the more i feel like "SOMETHING IS WRONG" o.0'' but im not sure wut that is. nebody know?

(and just in case that ddnt work)http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2005/009/b/a/strangleaningirl_by_o00o0o0o0o0o.jpg

VasH83 · Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 4:13 pm Post subject:

He nice work

maybe her head is a little a only little to big

And there is some clothes on her left shoulder that’s Sticking out i think I had draw it differently

show in her eyes a little more bling At least that’s what i think
and a little more bottom. Smile

But after all I think you have a have a nice style of drawing.
post some more of it.

kenshin777 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78

I must say that i agree ... although it may not be that the head is too big really ... it might just be that the hair is too big/ too far off the the head Wink

LoneWolf325 · Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:06 pm Post subject:

looks like my style about 5 years ago. Off to a good start, keep up the practice.

The hair looked a bit seperated from the head, figure's a bit frail, and her bum's missing. To correct the first, try sketching the head as if it were bald, then adding hair. As for the figure... just look at as many pictures as you can find, and remember, women are a little larger in the hips than men on account of they're designed for pushing babies through.(I stare at gir1s' legs way too much...)
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onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

thnx for the opinions

i wish i can post mor work, but i hav no scanner -.-...
or i can just bring all mi stuff to mi cousin's house someday and start scanning?

yes, the hair is too puffy or something. and i suck at drawing figures, so i gotta work on that. i think those are always mi two biggest problems.

and i suk at drawing eyes and butts o.0. should i stare more? XP
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LoneWolf325 · Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 12:21 pm Post subject:

my answer would be, "yes, you should stare more."

You might upset fewer gir1s if you find photographs to stare at, instead of real people.
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GreyHavens · newbie! Joined: Dec 23, 2004 Posts: 14

haha, yes stare all you want, just don't let them catch u. or rather, dont' let their bf's catch u.

jon_kazama · newbie! Joined: Dec 06, 2004 Posts: 37

Definately a nice start!

Shoulders almost aren't there, so upper arms looks too short.

I don't know if I would use the term "stare." "Study" sounds nicer. Wink

So, "study" a bit more and add at least a little hips and butt. Doesn't have to be huge, though.

Cura090 · newbie! Joined: Dec 09, 2004 Posts: 32

Well follow ur heart , mind and ur spirit this three main parts will help u 4 ur everyday life.

onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

haha, thanks for all the useful and strange comments 0.o"'

newayz, i been figuring out how to draw the head "right" these days. im still crap when it comes to making the body though -___- shoulders butt and all

and yes cura sensei, i shall follow both mi mind, body, AND spirit! '(O.O)" (wut kidna nu cult u starting?)
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