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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Zhandal Conscript

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| pretty good ;D |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 7:44 am Post subject: |
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| Zhandal wrote: |
| pretty good ;D |
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wolf newbie!

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| it's a nice design. To make it look better, I would suggest that the whole body have more curve will be nicer. The girl lean out too much. Kind of unbalanced. In this kind of posture, it will look nicer if the girl leans back a bit. Make the body in this ) curve. Er... guess a bit hard to understand.. |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:48 am Post subject: |
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| wolf wrote: |
| it's a nice design. To make it look better, I would suggest that the whole body have more curve will be nicer. The girl lean out too much. Kind of unbalanced. In this kind of posture, it will look nicer if the girl leans back a bit. Make the body in this ) curve. Er... guess a bit hard to understand.. |
i think i understand thanks a lot |
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gundamwranma Heimin (Commoner)

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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:17 am Post subject: |
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The overall drawing is very good but i wish you'd make it more mangaish  |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 11:13 am Post subject: |
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| gundamwranma wrote: |
The overall drawing is very good but i wish you'd make it more mangaish  |
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Corvuus newbie!

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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 3:26 am Post subject: not bad |
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not bad
keep it up |
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DrJaySlay Heimin (Commoner)

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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 10:58 am Post subject: |
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| its good. i personnaly like it a lot |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:47 pm Post subject: Re: not bad |
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| Corvuus wrote: |
not bad
keep it up |
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Kaijiin Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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| DrJaySlay wrote: |
| its good. i personnaly like it a lot |
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