Naruto and sasuke super transform

VasH83

i have a new one

one of the best pieces in the naruto manga, i realy love this part where naruto and sasuke go nuts on each other,

i know the hands are not that good and there are some more things that are not good Wink

but please tell me where i must improve on Crying or Very sad

cronik · Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 9:00 pm Post subject:

you might want to work on the facial proportions. for example, their heads look quite long. you might want to approach it traditionally: drawing an oval for the head, then placing the hairline about 3/4's of the way up on the face. also, the facial features are normally not so large, although in anime, that is often not the case. the nose, though, is not that long even in anime. your posturing of their bodies is quite good, but you might want to work on the crinkles in their clothing and how the clothing conforms to their bodies. in the drawing, it looks... unnatural.

anyway, good work. it looks pretty good.

shinsuku · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Oct 14, 2004 Posts: 57

over all its pretty good. altho the picture does look like its been stretched a bit.

VasH83 · Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:35 pm Post subject: