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bakanekonei
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 Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 11:49 am Post subject: technical angel |
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i finally can show this off.........
you can go ahead and crit if yah want. but i will not be changing anything. |
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DrJackal
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| Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 12:20 pm Post subject: |
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| That's really nice, i like the colours you have used for her. |
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winterymint
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| Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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Great use of colors.
Everything looks soo good..and I like how you're being unique with your face style, but I bet if you followed the bandwagon of the generic anime you'll get more fans.  |
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 2:25 pm Post subject: |
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| winterymint wrote: |
Great use of colors.
Everything looks soo good..and I like how you're being unique with your face style, but I bet if you followed the bandwagon of the generic anime you'll get more fans. |
quite the contrary. i drew straight generic anime for like 8 years, and i never got the attention i do now. if you do what everybody else does, you'll get awashed in the sea of millions. i try to offer something more original. |
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kenshin777
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| Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 5:45 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice ... i don't see much wrong with it at all ... very unique idea 
the only area that looks a bit strange is between her boobs and her stomach ... whatever that area is called ... i really haven't seen a girl do that pose before so it could be correct but it just looks like it sticks out a little bit to me ... |
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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| yeah i used a ref for the pose from an artist with a very stylized way of going about things.......but i donno, i love the pose myself. |
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gnownad
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| Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 2:11 am Post subject: |
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Personally I really like that, You are really quite amazing!!!!
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ella
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| Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 10:09 am Post subject: |
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| kenshin777 wrote: |
| the only area that looks a bit strange is between her boobs and her stomach ... whatever that area is called ... i really haven't seen a girl do that pose before so it could be correct but it just looks like it sticks out a little bit to me ... |
it looks fine. it's her ribcage.
great picture. i love the roller skates. |
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VasH83
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| Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 1:53 pm Post subject: |
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cool drawing again.
looks like a person of the manga airgear realy nice work.
also is this the one that you send to the Fan art Contest. If you did then you were almost or maybe winning the contest.
only when you look at this one in the fullscreen it seems that it's not completely round on the top side of the powerdevice.
anyway its looking good. |
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AlDim
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| Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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The pic is nice but the face seems strangely distorted (the left half is a lot wider than the right). Also her breasts look awkward. The zipper isn't centered, her.. uuh.. 'ribcage' or whatever is placed in an odd way. Actually there's something about her torso as a whole that's bugging me. Her right hand is strange too, emphasised by the coloring.
Anyway, good work overall.
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winterymint
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| Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 1:35 am Post subject: |
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| AlDim wrote: |
The pic is nice but the face seems strangely distorted (the left half is a lot wider than the right). Also her breasts look awkward. The zipper isn't centered, her.. uuh.. 'ribcage' or whatever is placed in an odd way. Actually there's something about her torso as a whole that's bugging me. Her right hand is strange too, emphasised by the coloring.
Anyway, good work overall. |
How do you know if the artist intended to place the zipper in the center? What if she wanted to have it offcentered? |
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AlDim
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| Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 7:04 am Post subject: |
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| winterymint wrote: |
| How do you know if the artist intended to place the zipper in the center? What if she wanted to have it offcentered? |
It's in the center of the breasts but not in the center of the torso. Which suggests that something is wrong (unless there's a large gap between the bra and the body, but there doesn't seem to be one).
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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| AlDim wrote: |
| winterymint wrote: |
| How do you know if the artist intended to place the zipper in the center? What if she wanted to have it offcentered? |
It's in the center of the breasts but not in the center of the torso. Which suggests that something is wrong (unless there's a large gap between the bra and the body, but there doesn't seem to be one). |
tho i did intend for the zipper to appear offcenter......... |
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bakanekonei
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| Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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| ella wrote: |
| kenshin777 wrote: |
| the only area that looks a bit strange is between her boobs and her stomach ... whatever that area is called ... i really haven't seen a girl do that pose before so it could be correct but it just looks like it sticks out a little bit to me ... |
it looks fine. it's her ribcage.
great picture. i love the roller skates. |
i love your avatar! maya the bee! |
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ella
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| Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 5:40 am Post subject: |
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| bakanekonei wrote: |
| i love your avatar! maya the bee! |
to tell you the truth, i thought it was only a german cartoon! but when i did a search on "biene maja" i got german sites that linked to sites in so many other languages. lol. and i had no idea it was japanese, either. lol.
and i downloaded the german theme song.  |
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