2nd photoshop attempt

armodon · newbie! Joined: Jul 08, 2004 Posts: 6

This is only my 2nd time using photoshop so if you know how I could improve on this I'd really appreciate it.

I like how i made the background but the characters seem a lil out of place. Cant figure out why though.

bakanekonei · Conscript Joined: Jan 30, 2004 Posts: 196 Location: USA

i think you need some color variation....try some shading......if you did that with the cloud and tree it would already looka lot better.

HyDrA · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jun 14, 2004 Posts: 215

hehehe! funny picture! well as for colouring u should stick with what bakane said Very Happy

basala · Conscript Joined: Jul 29, 2004 Posts: 134

my opinion is that: make the grass look more defined instead of vag it up.

interesting charactors....

alwu · newbie! Joined: Sep 26, 2004 Posts: 4

i'm a newbie in photoshop too, trying to sus out shading at the moment...
anyway, i agree with what was said before, little bit of shading on the characters. plus i think adding some shadow under the characters maybe? it'll make them hopefully sit in a bit

otherwise, looks cool ^^, characters look lively

Guest · Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 12:16 pm Post subject:

lol... the picture is quite amusing.. i like the coloring on the sky.. but the rest needs a bit work on

cronik · Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 2:04 am Post subject:

haha, i like the characters, actually. i think you just need to be consistent with your drawing style throughout the whole picture. drawing the background without sharply defined lines makes your characters seem like they don't belong with the picture. also, like they said, the shading style should also be consistent, too.

keybearer65 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Jul 21, 2004 Posts: 57

You have to admit that photoshop is hard to learn though you should try a little harder.

Jakumi · newbie! Joined: Dec 23, 2004 Posts: 2

the background could use a bit more definition, and the guys should have some shading and shiny spots.

spermbank-tycoon · Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 6:37 am Post subject:

Man wth is this crazy crap, I like it. well i think... to improve it u can... make the picture make more sense, or make it even more random... and put in a bit of shading and details n stuff if u want, and make it emotional. But yeah, that picture makes no sense what so ever to me, therefore appears my liking for it.
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HeavenlyxLegend · newbie! Joined: Mar 11, 2005 Posts: 8

That's adorable! But I think you should make it more... what is it? More dimensional, I guess? I love it though! The green guy is Cell, right?

Thadeus · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 09, 2005 Posts: 50

The simpsons became famous without shading but i think that you should work on it anyways. but its kind of amusing.