Ichigo 100% Fanfic: End Games

OgReLyNx · Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:42 pm Post subject:

OMG!!!

AmbiDextrose ur incredible!!! Very Happy

i skip the tsukasa ending
anyway let me critic the aya and yui ending.. well the aya ending is a touchy ending but a little on the simple side, i think i can compare it with a rush ending due to popular demand.. anyway the yui ending well it was awesome!!!! damn i could not stop smiling the whole time i read it, well if you plan to be a mangaka well i won't have 2nd thoughts in reading your work.. eheheh
gud luk in the future..

gohen1234 · newbie! Joined: Jan 19, 2006 Posts: 48

Zerogun · newbie! Joined: Sep 29, 2005 Posts: 7

Wow. Just Wow.

Finally got around to reading it (I was referred by a post in the Main Ichigo thread) and I think that it rocks.

I still like the Tsukasa ending much better than than the Aya ending. But everyone of your endings works out great!

taijutsumaster7 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Oct 01, 2005 Posts: 50

man!!! i love you!!! you are the freaking man!!!!
after that ichiigo ending i felt a heart wrenching void, but i can honestly say that you have cured me, i just finished reading the manga and i've been crying most of the day. i needed something to help me cope with the end of this extraordinary manga(becuz i've never gotten so emotional attached to a work of literature)

your endings were extremely fufilling, they were like i cure to my heavy heart. both aya's and nishino's endings brought tears of joy to my eye's
but what really snuck up on me was the yui ending, that was great!!!
honestly, i thought that manga was heading in that direction, becuz authors love irony in their endings(hence mizuki's nishino ending), and after that movie sotomaru sister gave manaka tickests to go see, i thought it was forshadowing that all the girls would move on, which is the REALISTIC, outcome of a story like this. the fact that you not only made it so that all parties found people to answer their love and let manka find love in the arms of his childhood friend(which will last) was nothing short of breath taking.

once again, i reiterate, you are the freaking man!!! Very Happy

yo, and why is this thread falling back in the pages, can't this thread like have it's own section, like "hall of fame fan fics" this is a master piece.

comeister · newbie! Joined: Feb 19, 2006 Posts: 13

Very well written and very well thought-out. I loved the official ending (though I was rooting for Aya), and your fanfic gave me a taste of what could have happened if it had turned out differently.

ule · newbie! Joined: Dec 21, 2005 Posts: 11

yea these were all very good endings to the manga! i loved the nishino ending( the one in paris) i liked that best. the aya 1 was a good alternative as well. the description was very vivid and lively. MAN this inspires me even more to tink about writing one as well... i had plans for this after reading the complete version of it... super cool.. it was superb.. truely a work of art. i dint enjoy yui's ending so much thou, it was really novel to think that he would end up with her.
but still u did a great job!
i liked the nishino b4 flying off ending as well. it was very nice of you to explain and analyse how the characters would react and gave me a more indepth look at how relationships in real-life could be as exciting or even more exciting than how these manga worked out. the aya ending was beautiful. how u carefully choose each word to describe their exact feelings. but i still feel like u wrote manaka to become suddenly so bold to be different from how his character would react to in the same situation. manaka was very confident as you wrote of him in the aya fanfic which made it feel unlike how things would come out had it happened like that.

plz dun be offended man, u have done a marvellous job for writing this alternate version. i enjoyed reading it straight thru. very gripping plot. u should write your own story man. if u were going to publish one i would be the 1st one to get a copy! plz keep me informed if you do! excellent!

airzack · newbie! Joined: Jan 24, 2006 Posts: 1

yeah i agree, really....eventhough i thought manaka would fell for toujou for her confession, but he didn't...but i do really think that toujou is a perfect match for junpei because this story is actually teling the story about the person who share their dreams together...anyway, the ending also didn't dissappointed me anyway, i do like tsukasa because she is very super cute... Wink

Anrui · Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:42 pm Post subject:

Those were awesome. I too am a Ichigo 100% fan and enjoy reading fan fics. Top notch! Very Happy