my fanart: want to know what you think about it!

doujo · Last edited by doujo on Wed Jul 13, 2005 5:11 pm; edited 1 time in total

Hi! I made some fanart and I just wanna know what you think about them... I'm not an expert, bare with me ^^ here are the links:
- http://fa.mediaminer.org/64/172064.jpg
I did that one a long time ago... hum...
- http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/175142
read what I wrote next to the image and you'll get the explanation of why the guy has a strange scratch on the cheek... the drawing is quite recent.
- http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/175222
I did it last week! But recently I draw a boy with the girl, but I didn't scan it yet. ^^
Please, tell me what you think! I accept critics, but don't be vulgar... please? I'll feel very low other wise... thanks!! ^^ and if you want you can as well tell me what you think in this forum and review the drawing on the website! ^^ Wink

July 13th:
Here are some new ones:

LiangZzZ · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:01 am Post subject:

I personally like the first one, it looks pleasant and peaceful to me. But for the second and third one, maybe you could do some more touch-up for the faces and the expressions, as they do not present that well. Anyway, good attempt! Keep it up! Wink

doujo · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 5:14 pm Post subject:

thanks for telling me ^^ I'll try to do better the next time Smile

though the 2nd and the 3rd one were older (the 3rd was on september and the 2nd on december... or january?) I was quite inexperienced! The first one I did it only last week, so I guess I'm better than 6 months ago... I've done another one today and I'll scan it later. I hope you'll like it better than the others!

doujo · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 5:46 pm Post subject:

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/175319
here, as promise ^^ I did it today! At school, while I wasn't listening to the movie in class. You know "A Beautiful Mind"? Well, that what I was supposed to watch. I didn't... oops. And it's for a project Confused

I guess I should have listen to it instead of drawing this... oh well!! Please, tell me what you think ^^ Wink

Malchiel · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:25 pm Post subject:

Let's c the first one, you want to lengthen her legs somewhat.

The third one is more anatomically corrent, now if you could make her dress tighter to show the contour better. As it is, it looks like she's fat.

The last one, is the most correct of them all. However I do think the sword is a bit odd. I think it should be showing its cutting edge instead of the broad side.

That's all I have to say for now. Keep it up ^^

Guest · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:53 pm Post subject:

Actually, for the legs, I wanted to do in the more Naruto's style I guess. The legs are quite short in this manga! And plus these kind of legs is, I think, more like a real human, of real life I mean. We don't have loong legs! ^^ It was just a try, maybe it doesn't quite fit her...? I'll do better next time then ^^ and the sword, well, it's the first time I'm actually drawing a sword!!... Next time I'll do it on the cutting edge then, I promise! Thanks for giving me these suggestions! Wink

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xistareatthesunx · newbie! Joined: Mar 09, 2005 Posts: 33

overall your poics are really good but i dunno something about the body proportions seem off. In the first pic her lefgs need to be longer since roughly the head to the waist should be as long as the legs. Also on the second one for the gurl the hands should hang a bit lower. Stand up and put ur hands down and you'll see what i mean. For the third feet could be bigger should be roughly length of forearm. And ur final one is a little werid maybe its just me but from the perspective u showing her u should shw less of the left side and more of the right shoulder. But yeah ur doing really good just keep practicing. I'm not great at proportions either so i spend lots of time when i'm bored in class to look around at the ppl next to me to see how curves and arms and legs and what not look like so when i draw i can get it more natural looking

doujo · Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 6:33 pm Post subject:

well for the second one we can't see the girl's hand so we can't really tell where it ends... Confused

just imagine if ends at the middle of the thigh lol and for the legs well you're the third one to tell me that lol Razz

so now I know it Wink

and the last one I took a model and well her body is a bit more twist that's why we see more her left shoulder. But I must agree, the left shoulder should be a bit less showing. Thanks for the suggestions ^^ though I won't have time to correct it, I'll do better next time for other drawings!

kevinn · Daimyo Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1596 Location: penang

hmm.... if you really wanted my opinion then i will just say..... well the drawing is a bit rough... don't have a proper toned lines..... well for the hands it is quite ok if you don't draw it out, coz i know beautiful hands are quite hard to draw, But you can hide it out.... then well i like most part of the drawing that express the backgrounds... the person felling i can't see it in the drawings.... well sorry if i offended you... when i was in form 3 i wanted to go to art class and be artish or lawyer but i beed force to go to accout class my teacher and parents... So for you that have a chance to decide it, i am very happy for you all.

doujo · Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2005 6:47 pm Post subject:

hum... first, no one is falling...? so it's normal if you can't see someone falling cuz nobody is falling lol and well my drawing were done quite fast... All of them were done in class (I'm not listening much in class, I know) so there's no play with the shades and I did quite hastily so it's not that beautiful even I don't quite like them but I just wanted some advice from others Confused

I'm never quite precise with my lines, it's true, I hate to admit it but it's true Sad

I'm always scared to make errors so well sometimes it's as if there were hairs! Confused

and anyway, these are only sketches. Thanks for the advice though, I'll try to do some more background (I'm a lazy girl, so sometimes I just don't want to draw the background!) I hope I'll soon get to do the final touch on these drawing (except the first one, I did it long ago and I just don't want to see it anymore I don't like that one! wonder why I put it there.....) anyway, see ya now ^^

kevinn · Daimyo Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1596 Location: penang

haha... well i like a person that always receive theire weaknees openly and dare to make it up again..... Wink

i also don't pay much attention at my class... but does i mention anything falling?? i think you have read it wrong i mean felling... you can try draw 2 people facing each other and make it like a love scence, well it is quite hard to do side draw but it is pretty fast.... try harder you have the pontentio.l

doujo · Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 1:42 pm Post subject:

aaah! Felling! Sorry indeed I didn't read right ^^' well, at first, it's true that I wanted to draw a kind of love scene. But once I finished to draw the girl, I changed my mind (for people who knows me well, that's not a suprise... I often change my mind of many things...) and I just wanted to give the impression that the guy is going away and that the girl is sad about it. At first, there weren't any wall. But hell, I wasn't able to draw the bottom of the guy >.< I was beginning to get tired and well I just gave up and draw a line! Rolling Eyes

I just finished to draw another pic. Though, as always... the lines are "hairy" Crying or Very sad

I think I'll try to put some color on that pic before i show it. Though I'm not good with colors...... I'm better with pencils... I guess I'll have to practice... I'll try to post it soon, and I hope you will like it ^^

kevinn · Daimyo Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1596 Location: penang

hhaha.... the bottom of the guy.... you make me think something perverted here Laughing

.... well i onli know about drawing with pencil and pens but i don't know anything about colour.... well pratice make prefect... hope you will do a better 1 next.^^ can't wait to enjoy your drawing again. Smile

doujo · Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:38 pm Post subject:

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/176471
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/176470
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/176468
Here a few I've done today. It's only sketches, don't expect too much about it Razz

Once I get the time, I'll try to put some colour, or at least some shades on it. I've also done the body but it really sucks for now, it's only mixed up lines, even I got lost with them -.- but I'll retouch everything and then it'll be better. But for now, bear with me with these drawings, and tell me what you think about them ^^