BitterSweet Anime

ShinRay · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:13 am Post subject: BitterSweet Anime

I will post my works here lemme know what you all think.
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ShinRay · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:16 am Post subject:

Above is Lain from Serial Expiriments Lain and below I hope we all know where she is from.

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ShinRay · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:33 am Post subject:

The original "Deviant" *hint hint* is from deviantArt I just remembered the pic while I was in class and drew it since I was really bored, teachers talk to much did anyone know that?
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Malchiel · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:41 am Post subject:

The first one is looking good ^^.

But the hands are kinda hard to draw, huh >< You know I always have the most difficulties drawing them.

On the second one, the distance between mouth to nose is too long.

The 3rd one is fine. But you might want to make the chin symmetrical. It's slightly off to the left.

Hehehe don't worry, you'll get back your drawing skills in no time Very Happy

Btw how to post in deviant art? I tried to post a picture, but I didn't think it ever show in the public gallery.

ShinRay · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:47 am Post subject:

Well for one u have to be a member and pay them money to be one, and two its so hard to find peoples pics in the stupid gallery easier to search by artist, or category for those who dont pay.
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Malchiel · Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:48 am Post subject:

no wonder ><

Oh and I just noticed, I love the shoes in the third picture. Quite detailed Very Happy

Kumiko · newbie! Joined: Mar 29, 2005 Posts: 1 Location: Nebraska

Those are goood! I looove the Hinata one! You're a really good artist! =D

Revan · newbie! Joined: Mar 30, 2005 Posts: 7

the 1st pict, the ...er hmm.. breast is too saggy (too low). Embarassed

the hinata pict is quite nice.

actually i also have done some drawings, maybe i should post.

ghostshadow · newbie! Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 35

good drawings in general, Id say try not to used the graph paper next time, it doesnt help, if you draw on blank paper, you can compare things much easier

ShinRay · Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 11:24 am Post subject:

Yeah Revan you should post Wink

and umm the graph paper thing was only cause I was so bored in math class that my teacher drove me to ignore her well that and I was done with the work for the next 3 weeks, but I still had to attend class.
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nakariri · Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 4:23 am Post subject: not bad

v nice.. it just that I think you need to work more on drawing line. try practicing making smooth and comfident line... it really help. (actually I am on it too.. Embarassed

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hey, your third drawing look a lot better than your last 2.
keep it up!
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