Final stages of a character dev. :D

[Hiddencamela]

One of the finalized sketches of a character a friend and I are working on for a series.
Not quite sure of a name yet so we've dubbed her "Reine's sister" (the main girl).

some of the shading didn't come out because of the quality of my scanner.... theres some shading on the face but most of it didn't show.
I feel my skill is improving with each of these sketches I do so....
Criticism please !

[Aoisuiren]

I like the picture as a whole to start off. And the style. Esp. The eyes. The shading is good. Her lest arm though on top is bent at a strange angle on top. She has kind of big feet, but it gives the view that you are seeing her from the ground. Well I really like it!

[kevinn]

nice pictures... but the leg is kindda big for a female legs.... and it would be a lot lot better if you could add a background to is.
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[the_underdog]

te feet are kinda big. and you need a bti more practice on hands. I know they are difficult, but they are important...unless u do what I use to do and hide them somehow .

kevinn- always requesting backgrounds .