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ed0kun Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 4:59 am Post subject: |
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| yea thats my work wasnt logged in posting it o.o |
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dasb newbie!

Joined: Mar 31, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: Portugal
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:01 am Post subject: |
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it doesn´t look like toujo but I think it's good _________________ "Dead for a thousand years, A great terror arose from the deep,It swept across the land,A lone past still lingers,Destiny cannot be denied,
A burden grows heavier,To the kingdom of the sun,Across a vast sea,The journey home begins..."
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pinkard Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 304
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:30 am Post subject: |
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gah humongous ava! X_x;;;;
any who i think its a very nice aya keep it up . you may wanna level out the eyes they seema bit slanted? |
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t1uper Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Mar 21, 2005 Posts: 52
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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| okay drawing, but doesn't look like aya at all |
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IchitakaSeto newbie!

Joined: Oct 07, 2004 Posts: 7
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:15 am Post subject: |
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| Doesnt look at aya at all, but its still good though |
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doujo Daimyo

Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1928 Location: ... in my panties?
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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I can see some Aya's traits! (like the hairs) but I won't repeat what the others say, cuz now I guess you know it Your drawing is really good. Maybe if you shortened the face, it would get better. The distance between the lips and the chin is too short as well. Enlarge a bit the shoulders too, she looks so small! Other wise, the eyes are really well done, I like your style. The nose is okay too, maybe you should put it a bit higher so the mouth could get higher as well.
I hope you'll do more. Your skills are good, I'm pretty sure you'll get even better if you practice more! You know, even I got some problems with proportions... I know them quite well though it seems like I can't draw it properly! lol. Do more! ^^ |
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ed0kun Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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lol ^_^ thanks for the comments all
yeah it doesnt really look like her to me too
the pic got a bit distorted cuz of the cellphone angle so her shoulders look small n her head looks bigger
but yea ill have some more stuff later |
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LiangZzZ Kyunin Samurai

Joined: Nov 21, 2004 Posts: 1242 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 10:43 pm Post subject: |
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| try to improve on her face and shoulders and it will look better... nice job! |
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azndrgn Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Apr 20, 2005 Posts: 93
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:08 am Post subject: not bad |
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| not bad work still needs more work on the size of the face still |
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kevinn Daimyo

Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 1596 Location: penang
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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althogh it doesn't looklike aya to me, but i think it is a prettygood art.... anyway nice drawing it...  _________________ Lay your head on my chest, so you hear every beat on my heart,
Now that nothing at all, that can keep us apart,
Touch my lips, close your eyes and see with your fingertips,
Things that you do, and you know I’m craz about you, |
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t3hlargo newbie!

Joined: Apr 02, 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:30 pm Post subject: |
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doesn't really look like toujo but good job XD
i can't even do half as good TT |
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dasthegreen Naginata Ashigaru

Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 505
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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 8:33 am Post subject: |
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| doesnt really look like toujo but i can see her in there a litlte bit. dam good drawing anyway though. |
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Serenity newbie!

Joined: Mar 13, 2005 Posts: 15
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 1:05 am Post subject: |
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| It doesn't reallt look like Aya...but still it's pretty good |
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yeeunit123 newbie!

Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 5:51 am Post subject: |
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| its a very well done drawing, but you should change her experession |
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