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Joined: Apr 14, 2005 Posts: 374 Location: somewhere between heaven and hell
Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 6:16 pm Post subject:
winry: i will make a force field first... defend hanako
fallout: i will keep trying...
yaski: i will take care of lucifer for the time being
the fellowship rush out of the force field...
fallout: lend me ur power, transfer them to me!!!
firetears: no lets think of some other ideas, it will wear us out even faster
joekool: no choice we need to run for now!!! _________________ i'm offline
Come on guys........... TT.TT........... my degendary items..................
Flemas shold be A LOT better than a blaster beam. but maybe cause you are in a very long distance, because one of the weak spot of Flemas is that the further away of you enermy, the weaker your attack does.........
Lucifer is suppose to Have the Ultimate Dragon Sol by now, the reason he is defeated, is that the air ship is too high up for Lucifer, It is completely out of his attacking range............ therefore, he basiscally cannot attack..................................................
So, generally speaking, you guys are dead................................................
for now...................................... _________________ I wonder why I am bleeding like this?
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Yaski:*thinking*Man, now that Lucifer has the Dragon Sol, which is useless for long range attack............ and Fallout's Flemas is weak against long range too.....................what can this Mace do???
As Yaski run, he pull out the Al-mighty Galena..............
Yaski: Oh, Galena hear my call and summon your power...
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Yaski: Oh, mighty Galena, fire..........Fire...........FIRE you Bastard!!!!
The airship continue the heavy assult at the company, the gangs trys to evade the attacks, but there are too many.....
Firetears: Aura!!!!
Firetears summoned a Protection aura surrounding the gangs..........she knows that it is not going to last for long, but it might be great for the gangs to catch their breath................
Firetears: Bad.......... I am too weak for this, the attack is too rapid and too powerful, it is 2X as strong as my aura............i..........cant.............................stand...................much......................................longer.....................
Than sudddently, the Mace - Galena shined Brightly.................the gangs gazed with shock.........
Galena: With your power and mine combined, nothing shall comes in our path.....................come.................come...............
Firetears, supprised by the legendary item's call, did not make anymove, than suddently, Galena flew into the hand of Firetears.....................
Firetears: Ahhhh! the power....... what is that Power i am feeling right now? I feel MUCH stronger................
Than, within a second, the aura, which is almost distroy by the attacks.............. turned bright Green, and the attack from the airship is COMPLETELY useless against it..........
Firetears: Is this all you can do?..........Do you want me to show you what real power is?
Firetears summoned a HUGE Fire Blast, rushing toward to airship...................................BOOM...............BOOM..................................................BOOOOOOOMMMMM...........Pieces of flesh and wood and metals felt from the sky..........
Firetears: Ahhhhh, just like many shooting stars...........
Fallout: OK.............. I am kinda scare of her......................
Firetears: With this baby over here, i shall protect lady Hanako........... _________________ I wonder why I am bleeding like this?
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Now that with all legendary items in place of the RIGHT hands:
Dragon Sol = Lucifer
Galena = Firetears
Flemas = FalloutX2
Please take good care of the items............
But keep somethings in mind, eventhough the legendary items are EXTREAMLY powerful, they all have weak spot......... therefore, you guys are NOT invinsible............
Dragon Sol : Short Range, No effect aginst the Hermonba, useless when user is in love with some one ( so basically if Lucifer wants the use the Dragon Sol, he must not fall in love...)
Galena : Long Range ONLY, can not attack enermies within the range of 10 feet away from user. No effect aginst the Hermonba, useless when user is in Rage..........
Flemas : short - long Range.......... lose effeciency when going on distance............... ( the further, the weaker ) No effect aginst the Hermonba, useless when user is Depress.
Legendary items are like humans, they have feelings too, so they can feel the user's feeling all the time............ and if the item is in wrong hand, it is worthless, like normal weapon( except for Dragon Sol, it will turn Extreamly heavy )....
Thank you....................... _________________ I wonder why I am bleeding like this?
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EDIT: RULES
you may add yourself to the story, but please stick to topic and read before posting! Also, I do not wish to see undestructable characters or invincible characters that can never die! and if you inveitable die please don't revive yourself unless it is logical or will enhance the story ^^
Lucifer : hi guys! Didn't have much time to participate with the story but since some people are making themselves TOTALLY INVINCIBLE, it is better that some rules are added to prevent abuse. And i'll be adding the rules to the front page. Please read the 1st page and give me suggestions on what rules are needed if i missed out any. Note that Naori's the MASTER here, so better not piss her off... lol
Naori: Quickly lets get on our way. It will be safer once we reached the kingdom at least. There are many mages and knights there that protects the kingdom from beastly attacks.
Hanako: how can we be quick we only have two feets... *whines*
Naori smiles.. She does a magical dance and bright yellow eyes appeared from all over and surrounded them.
The fellowship brought up their weapons.
Naori: Put your weapons down... They are my friends!
I would like to thank Firetears! You actually knew what my character was! The description describe him correctly!
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Just as Joekool was about to mount the puma, he spotted a tiny little red feathered bird.
Joekool: Poor guy... You can't fly? Don't worry I'll take ya along!
Joekool then picked up the red bird(spoiler, it's actually a phoenix) with his left hand and mounted the puma.
Soon our fellowship are on the road
Joekool: Yahoo! This is better than any rollercoaster ride back home!
Hanako: Weeeee~ FAST!
Lucifer: I still prefers horses... but it's better than walking
Firetears: Wished I learned summoning...
Naori: It's not everyday you get to ride a puma to enjoy it!
Our heroes soon reach a town that was deserted...
Lucifer: What happened here?
Firetears: An attack? No wait...
Joekool: Why do I get the feeling we aren't alone?
Ryuu: Because we are...
Villagers started walking towards our heroes. The villagers now had red eyes and pale-grey skin.
Joekool: Ghouls... vampires... ready or not here they come!
Firetears: Naori, winry, protect her ladyship at all costs! Fallout! keep firing Flemas! The rest of us will prevent the enemy from reaching her ladyship!
Joekool then placed the tiny red bird in his right pocket.
Joekool: I'll try my best to protect you,Hanako!
Lucifer: No retreats no surrender
Firetears then set up a firewall which created a barrier between them and the ghouls
You are VERY welcome Joekool! ^_^ Also, I don't know the sex of the bird... I made it a girl.
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The ghostly humans walked toward the crew and they all were ready for battle.
Firetears: Maybe they are people under a spell and we shouldn't kill them because they will die.
FalloutX2: It's better them than us.
Firetears: But still....
FalloutX2: Make a choice, if these people are under a control, it's done. It's better they die doing wrong then kill innocents. Make your choice!
Firetears let out a battle cry and shoot a fire blast at the zombies. Just as one snuck onto his back FalloutX2 shoots it with a arrow. Hanako broke free from protection of Naori and Winry and attacks a kicks a zimbie in the stomach. The zombie then takes Hanako's foot and flip it upward, causing her to flip backward toward Naori.
Hanako: This is tough.
Hanako slightly faints in Naori's arms.
Naori: She can't handle this! She's so helpless. I know she wants to help but if I protect her, i'll only make things worst...
Joekool: Go get em' girl!
The phoenix attacks a few zombies until one jumps onto her back and start to bit its wing.
Joekool: No!
Joekool jumps onto the phoenix and kicks the zombie off while airborne, watching it grossly splat onto the floor. Winry got a suprise attack from one zombie and fell onto the floor.
Lucifer: No!!!
Lucifer runs over to her aid and kills the zombie. After the zombie fell to the floor in pieces, Lucifer kneeled before Winry's body.
Lucifer: Are you awake? Answer me... Please!
Winry: It cut me... In my stomach...
Lucifer: Please! Stay strong! I'll stay here with you! I'll aid you! Don't die! Please!
Winry: Thank... Thank you!
Lucifer just stood smiling in Winry's face and watching her smile right back.
Firetears and FalloutX2 were faced back against back against a huge circle of monsters. Yaski and Ryuu suddenly appeared and raided through a gang of the monsters, nearly destroying the entire group.
Galena and Flemas: Now!
A strong aura surrounded FalloutX2 and Firetears and they suddenly began attacking the group of zombies. Before they could even open their eyes, they cleaned the entire raid. Nothing but lifeless bodies laid on the floor, most weren't even connected to the rest of their body.
Joekool: That's it, we killed them all!
Naori: Where's Lucifer and Winry?
FalloutX2: I suppose Lucifer went on alone to heal her, seeing how Yaski was tight up with fighting and all.
Firetears: Look guys!
Firetears pointed to a recently burned home, where 2 children(one boy, one girl) heads were peeking from the window. Their eyes seemed frightended and afraid.
FalloutX2: It's okay, we killed them all. Your safe now.
The Kid(Boy): Safe! You killed everyone?!?! You killed my brother! My mother! My father! There's no one left for me!
The kid drops down on his knees and start crying, the girl kneeling down beside him. The fellowshiped looked over to Firetears who buried his face in his hands.
Firetears: I knew it! I knew this was wrong! I knew it!
Firetears runs off from the group leaving behind a trail of tears and sorrow.
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I kinda agree with the new rules. It keeps everything in line and concentrates more on the story and not senseless post. I also agree with the invisibility rule, it just doesn't seem fair and will throw all the story out of line.
Joekool: You were so small when i found you and now...
Ryuu: Hey I remembered something!
everyone: What?
Ryuu: Phoenix's powers! Fire is it's strength and it's tears heals!
Joekool: Well... I think Crisom and I will try and heal those ghouls...
Much much later
Joekool: Of the 200 villagers, we killed 100. Of the remaining 100, we could only heal 64 of them as their bodies were intact. Whether or not they retain their human side, we do not know.
Lucifer: Ghouls... they aren't even human but vampires...
Yaski: So we have no choice but to kill them?
Naori: It's so unfair
FalloutX2: War is never fair...
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sorry if i made it short... but i am in a slight writer's block...
Joekool: What am I going to name the phoenix?
FalloutX2: I don't know, she's pretty huge right now...
The phoenix begans to shrink back to her normal size.
FalloutX2: Oooh! Lookie! It shrunk!
Naori: Yeah, phoenix tend to suck in energy when called upon for battle, which causes them to grow. Once everything cools down, he or she returns the energy and goes back to normal size. How else would they be travel size?
Joekool: Oh! I see!
FalloutX2: So let's name her Penelope!
Fellowship: Riiiihgt!
Joekool: I got it! I'll name her.....
Joekool: give me some time.... I want to give her the BEST name.
Naori points to the corpse.
Naori: look, they are growing fresh skin. They are getting up!
The rejuvenated beings began to get up.
The fellowship ran over.
Ryuu: Hi.
Being 1: who are you? where are we. *stares at own body* AHHHH! what happened to me..... *touches head* AAHHHHH! Where is my hair.
All the humans became frantic and frightened unaware of what happened to them. The little boy and girl ran out of the house towards someone they knew.
boy: brother brother do you remember me??
being 2: no, who are you.. am I your brother.. I am sorry little man.. I can't remember...
being 2 walked away.
boy chases after him..
boy: brother where are you going? come back!
being 2: our clan decided to head west and begin our new life for our kind.
boy: take me along brother!
being 2: I dont think you will fit in.. I hope you can find happiness with your kind!
girl: Christien, leave them be.
boy: Rekka did you find you father?
Rekka: no.
Hanako suddenly jumped out of no where..
Hanako:Why dont you come with uS!
Fallout: WHAT?? and take care of 10 year olds!
Christien: CAN I?? I want to get those monsters that did this to my family! my home!
Joined: Nov 09, 2004 Posts: 410 Location: i come and go wif the wind
Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 11:53 pm Post subject:
Fallout:wait!!! i sense something incoming...and its big... damned big!!! 9 o'clock!!!
firetears approaches the fellowship, he does not look normal... he looks pale... but most of all...he is freaking 20 times bigger...Galena is with him...
Fallout: omg...theres no way, even if i transform that i can beat this....person..
Naori: are u ok..firetears???
Firetears: i'm ok.... *laughs evil*
fellowship:.........
Fallout: all stay back!!! with that weapon...i dun think that you can reach he.....
Fellowship: ok....be careful
Fallout: ok i will...i promise.... firetears...what had happen to you???
Firetears: nothing...nothing at all... i found this power....but to use it..i have to kill you all...ha..ha..ha....
Fallout: grrrr...firetears listen to me ( energy blast nearly hit him) i guess there no talking now...*thinks* i'm too far away to do any good, so i have to go nearer to him...thats his weakness..and my strength
Fallout charges towards firetears...
Firetear: FOOL!!! (fires blast after blast)
Fallout: (bleeding alot and going to faint) thats no good... Lucifer, where are you!!!!
Firetears: so now...do you have any last words???
Fallout: i dun..cause i'm not going to die....
Firetears: after i kill you....i will kill all of you....
Fallout:no
Firetears: i'll tear all of u apart!!!
Fallout: no
Firetears: then i'll hunt down Lucifer and that girl
Fallout: NOOOOOO!!!!
Flemas: TRANSFORMATION!!!
Firetears: you think thats going to change anything??
Fallout: Purifying BLAST!!! (the 8 wings behind him fire a blast of pure white energy)
Firetears: nooooooo (got hit)
Fellowship: what the heck did you kill him for??
Fallout: (transforms back into normal) he is not dead...he was controlled by the Dark Lord and i used the blast to bring him back...
Firetears: he..lp....lucif..er....at....i...n..n *faints* _________________ :X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:
it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again
Joined: Nov 09, 2004 Posts: 410 Location: i come and go wif the wind
Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 11:54 pm Post subject:
opps....i was reply to the one on top of NAori's sorry..but i think this can continue Naori's story.... _________________ :X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:
it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again
I tried to fix up the mess.. XD but then john deleted his.
From John smith's deleted post:
Quote:
Fallout: Ahhhhhh........ i am all against the fact that this little kid is comming with us...................No way..................absolutely no way i am going to look after that stupid kid.....................................
Christien: Yo, why are you so against me? do you really hates me that much?
Fallout:............eh........... not that i really hates you............ but...........bu................but you are going to be a burden to us, you know, we fight bad guys, evil dudes, and maybe sometimes........................................ the terrifing......Boogie man.............................
Christien: .........................................sorry, but i am not scard of Boogie man, Mr. Ghost story........
Fallout: Damn you little...............
So, with Fallout speach less, Christien, the little 10 years old joined the gang and continue on the jouney...........
Lucifer:mmmmm, i really want to name the phoenic............... but i shall leave the Honor to you Joekool, since you ARE the rightful owner of her...............................
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My post
The nights event was in segments with a incoming attack from firetears who left the group earlier on. He walk to the lake and came upon the camp site of one of the dark lord's minion. His name was Kalua. A dark nercromancer with the abilities to control people's thought. At that time firetears mind was weak therefore kalua had to opportunity to invade his thought a take over. Giving firetears the image taht the fellowship killed innocent human being. But in actuality they killed zombies.
and firetears came back angry and destructive. he attacked when the boy christien was going to join their group along with her girl pal Rekka.
But after Fallout pacified firetears and he had a nights rest to recollect he regained control of his mind.
As for winry and Lucifer they came back from their hideout. Winry had a gloomy expression on her face when she came back.
Lucifer went over and talked with joekool about his new found phoenix.
Hanako asked winry: why are you so sad winry?
Winry: I was sooo happy I thought Lucifer actually like me when he so carefully tended to me. but he said he didnt want to see anyone get hurt like what happened with his wife.
Hanako: what happened with his wife?
Winry: he said she died. killed by the dark lord therefore he gave his alligence to the lord so he could one day vanquish the dark lord sashimo
( Then i think i shall start from wher Fallout left off? )
Fallout: What? Lucifer too?
Followship: We must hurry back to the inn.......
As the gangs rush back to the inn, there, out of nowhere, the ground shaked, and a nearby house is being cuted in half.........
Naori: OH, Great, so now Lucifer is being controlled and he is holding the Dragon Sol...........
Joekool: No good, my phoenex is resting, no good for battle.........
Fallout: Dont look at me guys ( no one is looking at him ) is just ran out of strenth while fighting Firetears..........
Ryuu:Good lord, Yaski and i is injured...........and we shall never let lady Hanako fight.............
Naori: Let me handle this.......... I think i can hang on for a while, please stay away from the battle ground........
Hanako: NOooooo, dont do it Naori, you cant, dont...............
Then, the pendant of Hanako which is made from Hermonba Stone, shine bright, then, in an instant, Naori turned into a Large Mystical Beast........... Naori rush toward Lucifer....
Fallout: Oh no, she is a goner, nothing is going to stand a clean cut from the Dragon Sol............
To the Party's supprise.......... Eventhough, the legendary sword is hitting the flesh of Naori, but the sword seems unable to do ANY damage at all to Naori..................Naori, confuse like everyone is, did not waste any time and counter attack Lucifer with Her Sharp Fangs............ Lucifer is knod out cold.........
Fallout:WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dont tell me that you are stronger than the Legentdary sword, that is imposible.....
Naori: I dont know fallout, i dont know, ( now turned back into the cat-girl she usually look like )........... it seem to be a Very strong aura is protecting me when the sword hited me.............. but that never happened with other weapons............... not even a simple iron sword....
Lucifer and Firetear lay on the bad of the inn, resting from the injures that fallout and Naori did to them......................
*A mysterious pretty women walk into the door*
Women: May i see Lucifer please.........
Ruyy: who are you? how do you know Lucifer?
Women: I am the wife of Lucifer, i wish to see him, may I?
Fallout: come with me......................*thinking* Lucifer has a wife? i have never heard him mentioning anything about her before.....
*Please do the honor Naori*( u no wut i mean ) _________________ I wonder why I am bleeding like this?
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Joined: Apr 14, 2005 Posts: 374 Location: somewhere between heaven and hell
Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 12:58 am Post subject:
joe u got i wrong lucifer didn't turn evil...dots
okie and the wife is dead...dots
nvm i will continue
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this is also blank off _________________ i'm offline
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