Chain Manga Story - ENTER THE MAGIC!

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

Apparently only winry knew the truth behind lucifer's wife being dead.
because of her conversation with Lucifer previously.

Winry: Thats not his wife she's dead!
hanako: don't be silly am i right ms? umm..
?: call me, Ivy.
Hanako: Ivy, so how do we know your Lucifer's wife.

Ivy takes out a chain incrested with a eagle.
Naori went to take a look.

Naori:It looks like Lucifer's family crest.
Hakako: see~~ ! don't say such things.. your just jealous because lucifer rejected you!

Winry: NOOOOO!!! you got to believe me!
Hanako: stop lying already!

Winry got mad and stormed out of the inn and sulked outside.

Hanako: let me take you to lucifer's bed side! he's injured right now.. but I bet he'll be happy to see you~

the two went upstairs.

*In Lucifer's bed chamber* Ivy was left alone with Lucifer.

Ivy: Lucifer~~ lucifer~~~

Lucifer lifted his eye lid a little..
Lucifer: ivy. is that really you... I miss you ivy~~

Ivy gave a little laugh...

Lucifer suddenly realized and opened his eyes fully...
Lucifer: your not IVY!

Ivy: when did you realize!

Ivy grabbed onto Lucifer and started stabbing him. Lucifer gave ivy a kick in the stomach.

Hanako: hehe.. joekool you here that.. Lucifer and ivy are making lovie..~ hehe..
Joekool: NOT INFRONT OF THE CHILDREN~~~ XD
christien: it's alright, we know about these things.. our village marry at the age of 13.

hanako went a blank eye
hanako: o_O~~

back at the battle. Ivy lunged at Lucifer.
Ivy: quickly and DIE~ (ivy's voice changed into a male voice)
Lucifer: So its you MARCUS! your traitor.. !!!!
Marcus: YA I KILL YOU AT LASt and all your chumbs.. but i'll let you die slowly!!! So you can feel the pain and suffering of everyone you die right before you face!

hanako and joekool were having a party downstairs and drinking rum...
hanako: hick.. joe... you know.. wa - ta *falls asleep*
joekool: what about.. hick .. wa..*falls asleep*

the two kids christien and rekka were at the other end taking care or ryuu , firetears and yaski

fallout was outside with naori standing guard.

while upstair the battle between the injured Lucifer and Marcus raged on.
Lucifer: Bastard, why again and again you come and hurt the people I LOVE! I kill you!
Marcus: you stole my IVY!
Lucifer: Ivy never loved yoU!
Marcus: she was arranged to marry me! and look she died in your protection!
Lucifer: She died by sashimo and his minions! why do you still work for him!
Marcus: Because they gave me strength to kill you.. I was a weakliing.. NOW LOOK AT ME!!

Marcus pounced. Lucifer tried to avoid but marcus grabbed hold of his leg. and he tackled Lucifer down in his weakened state. and especially now after receiving several stabs from marcus in disillusioned state.

Marcus: thanks to your own team member I can kill you.. and with the help of Kalua.. haha...

suddenly a shoe flew into the window and hit Marcus in the head. It was winry.

Winry: I knew it.. but no one believe me.. ~

she used her alchemist magic and threw fire bombs at him!
Marcus's clothes caught fire.

Marcus: aaa aaaa.. .I'll be BACK... you see..~~! and he jumped out the window.

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

Im sorry.. To mention again.. Kalua.. only minpulates the mind.. nothing else~ Can everyone stick to one element.. i dont want one person to know everything.. pretty pointless.. XD

like one firetears knows elemental magic.. and joekool can heal.. lucifer is a great fighter.. and fallout is our comic relief.. winry i thought since you mention alchemist can create stuff.. Naori is a animal summoner and hanako can transform naori into a strong animal.. yaski's very good with drugs and anitotes apparently.. and ryuu is also another fighter lets make him with some brains.. since he is a business tycoon he should have abilities to plan.

reckon.. that i know you all want to have more than one talent

falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:22 am Post subject:

Fallout and Naori heard the crash and hurried to Lucifer's room..

Fallout: omg....we need a healer,,Joe!!!

Joe: huh!!!(runs to Lucifer's room) *looking at Lucifer* Fallout...i need you and Naori to get the golden herb from the eldest Dragon... quick!!! be back by tomorrow!!! get it by hook or crook, just get it!!!

Fallout/Naori: it will be done * runs out*

Joe: Winry... i need some hot water, threads and needles...and stand guard outside when your done getting all the things i want, i cannot be interuppted...let no one but Fallout and Naori in here!!!

Winry: count on me!!
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:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:24 am Post subject:

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:24 am Post subject:

this is empty off
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falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:26 am Post subject:

guys i think that we should continue Naori's story line... it that ok with you soaringair???
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:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

fallout has many talents locked away.. he regains them slowly.. okay? but let me once again hence slowly! we want to make it more of an impact every learns more and more...and strong and stronger to meet the boss..

comic relief= the character the makes the story funny.

and maybe we should continue with my version.. a vampire sounds a bit hmm.. .. off topic..

johnsmith · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:36 am Post subject:

Thanks Noari............. I will take it from here.......

Lucifer:......... Ivy, my dear Ivy, she IS dead..... she is not revived after all...........*sob* *sob*

Winry: How can you be so stupid!!!! ( winry scream and ran out the door and out the inn, crying out loud......)

Lucfer: Winry.....................WINRY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Luicfer got off the bed, and chase after Winry out the door.......... As he ran, blood leaking out from the wound that Marcu did to him.......

Lucifer: Winry, I........I..........I am sorry.............

Winry: Sorry for what,*sob* there's nothing for you to be sorry about....*sob*......... now be gone, i dont want to see u anymore......*sob*

Lucifer:.................Winry, please just listen to .............

Winry: No!!! i dont want to! I dont want to know what you're going to say!!!!!!!

Lucifer: Please.............................Urg.........................*collap*

Winry: Lucifer!!!!!!!!!!!! No lucifer, oh my god!!!! you're......you are bleeding!!!

Winry carry Lucifer up to his room, and she bandages his bleeding wounds carefully................................. after 30 minutes, Lucifer began to wake up..... he open his eyes, finding only Winry by his side looking at him....................he grab the hand of Winry with both hands...........Winry turned away ( Embarassed

shy

)......

Lucifer: now........ will you...............listen......to me ...now?

Winry:* shaked her head*

Lucifer: You........trully..............loves me.................and i ignored all.................. that before............... but from ..............now on.............................all............will ............change....................

Winry: Embarassed

Winry:*thinking* oh...........this is like a dream comes true............

*important point* Lucifer does not know that love is going to take away his ability of controlling the Dragon Sol..........
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falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:40 am Post subject:

errr...if ur there... joe is still treating lucifer...and fallout/naori is getting a golden herb..... hmmmm
_________________
:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

to add it the reason why love will take away his ability to control the Dragon sol is.. the dragon sol was weld on the behalf that Lucifer had a strong desire to venge! Dragon Sol was powered and drived by his will to venge. Also I dont think Winry should heal lucifer with her "magic" it should be either joekool or yaski.. they are healers.. XD

johnsmith · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 1:46 am Post subject:

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

hope Im not being too pushy with the story.. just wanted everyone to have a equal ability to protray instead of everyone acting the same and doing the same stuff.. XD

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:01 am Post subject:

hmmm like this, hard to post dots... i was writing then fallout post... dots...

then now where the story stop Question

winry is no healer when did she turn into 1 Question

she's a alchemist...dots

and some part of the story dont match
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falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:12 am Post subject:

stop!!! stop!!!! nobody post anything till somebody make it right!!! Naori.....can you help to put the story back on track to that the rest of us can continue....too messed up...Naori its all up to you now... turn to ur dragon form and start wacking all the wrongs and putting the rights in place :p
_________________
:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

As of now.

Lucifer has been badly injured by the Ivy in disguised Marcus.
Winry saves Lucifer from being killed.
Winry badages up Lucifer's wound.

Hanako and joekool is sleep due to drunkardness.
yaski, ryuu and firetears are injured and is now resting in the downstairs quarter. Hanako and joekool is sleeping on the ground in the livingroom.
Christien and rekka is tending the wounded downstairs.

Naori and fallout are outside guarding.

Marcus ran away out the window and swore to be back.