Chain Manga Story - ENTER THE MAGIC!

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:26 am Post subject:

naori did u just change the name of lucifer wife or was it already there
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Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

a no.. its was predetermined. since we werent going to follow the one you added because somehow she turned into a vampire.. it really didnt flow with the text and the theme of the story.

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:30 am Post subject:

do u mind send me a list of names in ur story+ those that are predetermine by u otherwize when i add then u change... then i need to clear+ a summarise ver of ur predetermine story Crying or Very sad

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falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:35 am Post subject:

so for once, the fellowship can rest for 1 night without interruption...

*next morning*

Hanako:awww.. my head hurts

Joekool:mine is exploding...

Naori:ekkk... Fallout!!! why are you lying on me... where are you putting ur hands ?! *smacks Fallout's head*

Fallout: ouch ouch....wha... ouch!!!ouch!!! enermy attack?! oww..my head... Naori...what the..ouch...heck are...ouc...you doing?!

Firetears: i'm injuried..can't you gimme some rest!!!

Fallout: * running all over inn with Naori holding a wicked looking chopper* i'll stop if she sto * chopper thrown by Naori hits his butt*
OWWWWW!!!

Naori: opps....i'm sorry???

Joekool: great...looks like i have another patient ..can't i have a rest day??
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:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

Naori · newbie! Joined: Apr 22, 2005 Posts: 37

a well cause i was writing at the same time you were.. and I was suppose to help John bring in the EVIL WIFE thing. .so.. it got messy..

anyways.. there should be a lists of all the things that are happening and character reviews on page 6. read through

SORRY MY BAD.. its on page 5

whoops wrong again.. page 4 positive this time.. i checked it out

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:43 am Post subject:

its on page 6
this is y this is bad, it will sudden pop out some1 to cut ur story Wink

pls wait i will be writing
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soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:54 am Post subject:

winry woke up when lucifer was stroking through her hair
Winry: huh? lucifer ur awake... are u okie... did marcus hurt you badly
Lucifer: No no i'm just fine, thank you for ur concern... u have spend the whole nite watching after me thank you! Crying or Very sad

Winry: that no big deal along u r fine that will be good enough...... I VOW THAT I KILL MARCUS WITH MY BEAR HANDS FOR DOING SUCH A THING ON YOU
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back outside:~

Hanako: i guess we wont be hit the road today...
Joekool: ya i guess so!

Fallout: ARRRRRRHHHHHHHH my butt hurt, all thx to u naori....
Naori: wad its because u... *She smack fallout ars agin, fallout jumped high up in the air*
Fallout: wad u think u r doing...
Naori: repaying me debts...haha

*Fellowship all started laughing exp fallout*
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soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:57 am Post subject:

pls wait fallout posting Cool

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falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 4:03 am Post subject:

one more peaceful day passes..and though Lucifer and fallout's....ass had not fully recovered yet...they decided that they have no time to lose

Fallout: i miss my anything proof T.T

Naori: no pain no gain right?

Fallout:......

Fellowship: guys.. break it out...

the forest was peaceful enough...till Marcus appeared again

Marcus: told you...i would be back.... * a frightful scar covers half of his face* Winry look what u have done....today is pay back day....

Fallout: less crap..more fighting * runs towards Marcus* pain...pain...pain....owww!!!!

Joekool: you are not yet recovered yet!!!!

Marcus: as you wish....

the nine headed hydra which captured Hanako last time appeared....
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:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

soaringair · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 4:15 am Post subject:

haha u brought back what i leave behind my hydra Obilisik
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Naori pull fallout's ear today u r gonna sit here wan watch....
Fallout: awwww
Naori: let winry do it this time, she needs to vent it out, we will hlp if she can't mange by herself

winry rush towards marcus and the hydra, she clap and her sword appear...
the hydra hisss and strike with full force, all nine heads down...
winry jump a few steps back...
then she created walls made of mirror...
the hydra was confused...
Marcus: she's over there... no no there... no no there
the hydra strike as marcus command... but all not avail

sissss... one of the head drop...
Macus: wahahaha u cannot kill Obilisik with such punny attack of urs
the head was regenerated...

Winry speak out from nowhere: u think i was aiming for Obilisik, well you r wrong
Marcus: arrrrrrr... my arms...
one arm was burning in flames and the other in ice...
Marcus: wad have u done to them...
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XenoLegend · newbie! Joined: Mar 23, 2005 Posts: 22 Location: unknown

hmmm......... who is main character actually ?
it should be hanako right ? but why is it hanako didn't talk much and in the story she also did't do anything much ?

i wanna join but it became very confusing now .....

P/S : Everyone is so dammed powerfull so... just kill the lord !!!

falloutX2 · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 6:53 am Post subject:

its a long story.....the characters might appear strong now...but new challenges will appear and there will be internal conflict and stuff like that... and btw..i would like to ask all of u guys here if i can try to make it into a mini novel??

just telling u guys... everything here cept' the 'non-story part' has a grand total of 35 with a font size of 12 and times new roman as its font...
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:X:memories may fade...but feelings never fade:X:

it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....

johnsmith · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:01 pm Post subject:

(You are reading my mind fallout.........) Cool

Winry,though she is skilled at Alchemy, cannot beat the Hydra with suck normal weapon of hers............are after her succesful attack on Macus' arms, he is now fully concetrate on defence, therefore, Now Winry cannot land a single attack on Macus..............

Lucifer: I shall come to your aid............ *he draws out his legendary sword*

the sword is too heavy for lucifer to hold...........he droped it hard on the ground.........

Lucifer: what? what is happening? my sword........It is heavy............

The gang watch in horror.................... enable to figure of the reason why Lucifer suddently lose his abillity of using the Dragon Sol......

Winry:Ahhhh.............

Winry is in a very dangerous situation, the hydra is closing on her and she attack is useless against the hydra...........

Macus: Prepare to watch her die Lucifer.......... You shall feel my pain when i realized that Ivy is dead..................

Lucifer launch himself at Macus, sending punches at Macus' face........

Lucifer: I cant not use the sword, but i still have my fist, which you don't...............
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Firetears · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 3:55 pm Post subject:

Firetears · Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 4:29 pm Post subject:

Fellowship: Wow! Oooh! Amazing!

The fellowship mindlessly gazed at Lucifer as he beat Marcus down to a pulp.

Hanako: For someone with the mouth, he sure can't fight too good...

Suddenly, Marcus shape shifted into Winry.

Marcus/Winry: Beat me now!

Marcus kicked Lucifer off him and ran over to Winry, where he grabbed her by the hands and spun around with her a few times before falling to the floor.

Joekool: Winry!

Joekool and Hanako ran over to help off the ground. Just as they ran over to the body, they realized they lost track of who the real Winry is.

Hanako: Winry?
Both Winrys: Huh??? Imposter! No! You are!

The sychronized Winrys soon turned into muble jumble and no one can understand anything they were saying, even though they were speaking English.

FalloutX2: Hold it! I just realized something.... You two look the same!
Naomi: (Grabs FalloutX2 by the arm and pulls him to the side) The less you say, the better.
Lucifer: Winry...
Hanako: This is hard... Which one is it?
Joekool: I got it! My phoenix can smell the scent of the real Winry.

The phoenix sniffs both of the Winrys and suddenly gained a confusing headache.

Lucifer: Impossible, they even have the same scent!
Winry: Can't you tell it's me! Lucifer!
Other Winry: Oh my god! Your such a fake!
Winry: Gosh Lucifer! Shouldn't true love and heart tell you which one is which?
Lucifer: I guess it can!

Lucifer runs over to the talking Winry and kicks her in the face.

Other Winry: How could you tell?
Lucifer: Marcus was obviously being a stereotypical female, soemthing your not, which is why I like you.
Winry: Lucifer...
Hanako: Hey! That sounds like something I would say... Does that make me stereotypical?

The Winry laying on the floor shapeshifts back to Marcus and gets on his feet.

Marcus: That's okay! I still have tricks up my sleeve!

Marcus digs in his pocket and pull out a smoke bomb. After setting it off, runs over to Hanako and kicks her in the chin, instantly knocking her out.

Joekool: Hanako!

Joekool runs toward Marcus who is currently carrying Hanako to his carriage, Joekool as the only one who witnessed Hanako getting snatched. Being too late to call for help, he ran toward the escaping carriage and jumped on the back. After going a few miles away from the fellowship, he reached his hand into the carriage and managed to feel Hanako, which he instantly pulled her out of the carriage and they tumbled down a hill into a villiage...
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Now that Hanako is alone with Joekool, please don't rush Hanako back with the fellowship. Take your time with this moment. Besides, once the fellowship discovers she's gone, they would assume that Marcus kidnapped her and follow his trail, giving Hanako and Joekool more time to be with themselves.