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soaringair
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 6:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

they fall down the slope

Joe: are u alright?
Hanako: i'm fine, just suffer so small cut
Joe: No problem, i will heal you...
Hanako: thank

Not being able to go any further with such injuries, they decided to camp out overnight...

Joe: hanako, you will need to rest, i'll watch over tonight
Hanako: thanks... you feel tired please wake me up
Joe: sure

As the night, joe feel sleepy and starts to fall in to dream land...
because he have vow to protect hanako he did not wake her up...

Suddenly, flash of beam strike them
Both: arrr
the grey figure came out from darkness.. taking the shape of fallout
Both: fallout, why are attacking us
Fallout: beacuse i'm working cover for the dark lord, MUHAHAHA

fallout fires again... they manage to dodge safely
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 6:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fallout fires blast after blast.... Joe and Hanako....dodges,having no weapon...

Joe: something is different about this guy...Fallout had lost his beam blaster and stuff and how did he got back his robot self???

Fallout: The dark lord had given me powers that u cannot start to imagine!! MUhahahaha!!

Hanako: one thing has not changed, his laugh....

Fallout's firing nearly destorying everthing, after one very huge explosion, Joe and Hanako ran away from him in the cover of the smoke....

Meanwhile

Fallout: * talking to Naori* where the heck did both of them go???

Naori: i don't know...

Fallout: don't worry..we'll find them...i'm sure of it...
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Naori
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 7:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hanako and Joekool starts running. They hid in a tree trunk.

Joekool: Hanako don't make a sound or fallout might here us.

Just outside the tree trunk was fallout.

Fallout: no need to hid I know where you guys are! COME OUT! or I shoot.. but I'll shoot anyways ... WHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA

Fallout used his pistol guns and started shooting. It hit joekool on the arms and on the legs.

Joekool started bleeding... He tried to use his heal on himself, but it seems taht his power seemed useless. Now Hanako was shot on the arm.

Joekool: maybe I cant heal myself.. let me try heal you

it didnt work.

Hanako: what happened?
Joekool: I dont know.. this place is definitely very strange.

Apparently they are in a dream sequence controlled by Kalua. But what happens in their dreams are happening in real life. They are bleeding to death and trapped within their own dreams.

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From now on recaps should be in red and bold italics..XD ill do the recaps but just so everyone knows its a recap!
and rules will be written in blue.. so blue refrain from using those colours but you are free to use others.

RECAP of EVENTS

Hanako is a girl in modern times that got sent to another world another time after her fall onto the river bank

She was then rescued by Naori, a cursed girl that takes the form of a cat.
guardian of hanako. hanako has the abilities to transform hanako with her pendant into a giant beastie

Later on Hanako returned to the her modern world and meets watashi a myserious guy she has the "hots" for.

Naori suddenly appears in Hanako's world and was injured and then taken in by a rich tycoon called Ryuu and was cured by the drug doctor yaski.

Then suddenly a dragon appears and Lucifer a knight and firetears a mage came out of nowhere claiming to be the protector of Hanako. Hanako is suppose to be the daughter of a once powerful lord. Her kingdom resides on the northern mountains

Johnsmith friend of lucifer and firetears is working for the Dark Lord Sashimo. but he is just a spy.


They are then transported back to the other world by a strong light.

Their destination right now is to the Northern Mountain. Johnsmith gave fallout, firetears, and lucifer legendary weapons.
Fallout is a robot turned humanwho came from the future.

And Ryuu himself holds a mysterious weapon yet to be revealed
Between Naori and Ryuu they have a secret. Also yet to be revealed.

Yaski is ploting to take over this world with the possesion of the pendant.
he hasnt made any moves yet. which will also be revealled later.

They meet winry an alchemist on their journey. She is a daughter of an innkeeper.

Lucifer currently loves winry.
but doesnt know love will make him unable to weld the legendary weapon.

Current sub-villian
Marcus whom is Lucifer's enemy. Seeks to kill anyone associated with Lucifer because he stole her fiancee Ivy. Ivy and Lucifer were in true love. Sashimo killed her. and Marcus works for sashimo.

Kalua mind controller.

Current situation hanako and joekool (joekool is a school boy in modern times and studies with hanako, mysterious gains the power to heal) is lost and is trapped within a dream.


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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

actually i already named the phoenix and she's called crisom. sorry for not saying it earlier... and one more thing... the relationship between joekool and hanako are currently friends... but if ya wanna make it more than that...
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Joekool: Fallout... attacking us, my healing powers not really working...

Hanako: Could this be an... illusion?

Joekool thinks back to the Naruto anime

Joekool: possible... but pain is supposed to be one of the methods to release and illusion right?

Hanako: Yeah... but OH YEAH! I remembered something important!

Joekool: What?

Hanako: Crisom and you may just have a psychic connection!

Joekool: Psychic connection?

Hanako:When pets and their owners are very close, they can literally understand each other even their language differs and can sense each other even if their far away!

Meanwhile with the fellowship

Crisom woke up and flew into the sky, it then flew to where Joekool is...

Back in the Dream(they don't know yet)

Hanako: How is it?

Joekool: She is near...

and at that point a blast was shot towards Hanako and Joekool only to be deflected by Crisom's wing...

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to the next person writing... you could get Crisom to explain that they are in a dream...
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naori wrote:

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RECAP of EVENTS

Hanako is a girl in modern times that got sent to another world another time after her fall onto the river bank

She was then rescued by Naori, a cursed girl that takes the form of a cat.
guardian of hanako. hanako has the abilities to transform hanako with her pendant into a giant beastie

Later on Hanako returned to the her modern world and meets watashi a myserious guy she has the "hots" for.

Naori suddenly appears in Hanako's world and was injured and then taken in by a rich tycoon called Ryuu and was cured by the drug doctor yaski.

Then suddenly a dragon appears and Lucifer a knight and firetears a mage came out of nowhere claiming to be the protector of Hanako. Hanako is suppose to be the daughter of a once powerful lord. Her kingdom resides on the northern mountains

Johnsmith friend of lucifer and firetears is working for the Dark Lord Sashimo. but he is just a spy.


They are then transported back to the other world by a strong light.

Their destination right now is to the Northern Mountain. Johnsmith gave fallout, firetears, and lucifer legendary weapons.
Fallout is a robot turned humanwho came from the future.

And Ryuu himself holds a mysterious weapon yet to be revealed
Between Naori and Ryuu they have a secret. Also yet to be revealed.

Yaski is ploting to take over this world with the possesion of the pendant.
he hasnt made any moves yet. which will also be revealled later.

They meet winry an alchemist on their journey. She is a daughter of an innkeeper.

Lucifer currently loves winry.
but doesnt know love will make him unable to weld the legendary weapon.

Current sub-villian
Marcus whom is Lucifer's enemy. Seeks to kill anyone associated with Lucifer because he stole her fiancee Ivy. Ivy and Lucifer were in true love. Sashimo killed her. and Marcus works for sashimo.

Kalua mind controller.

Current situation hanako and joekool (joekool is a school boy in modern times and studies with hanako, mysterious gains the power to heal) is lost and is trapped within a dream.


Wait a second, didn't Hanako run away in the past timeframe, which means they aren't back in modern times. Hanako ran away because she felt that everyone was being selfish and not caring to take care of her and lead her to her father, the lord. As of this moment, no one explained how far away is her father but they were planning to go there. As Hanako ran away she met Watashi, I guy she had a crush on in her timeframe. Right now, she doesn't even know why he's in the past but if we could stick to Hanako for a while, we could find out.
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

right she isnt in the modern time frame.. i was state that joekool, watashi and hanako are from the modern time .. but hanako is known in the past time.. understand? and they are trying to go find out more about her identities and what is the current situation in their kingdom.

8. Recaps will be written in Red Bold italics and Rules will be written in Blue. Please refrain from using those colours.
Written by Naori (feel free to use recaps though but make sure the information is accurate. Or just message me if it isn't and ill fix it.)
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 8:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hanako: Where is Crimson?
Joekool: Do you know how far away we got until we got into this villiage, it could take Crimson a while.

Suddenly someone came crashing through the walls.

Joekool: Crimson! Hey girl!
Crimson ~Roars~
Joekool: Crimson! Watch out! FalloutX2 is behind you!

Crimson turned around and found FalloutX2 bum rushing into her. Hanako felt a sudden urge of anger and ran toward FalloutX2 and suddenly kicked him.

Joekool: Wow! That was great! You actually game him a dent!
Hanako: Really? I never knew I had it in me...

Suddenly FalloutX2 hit Hanako with a blast. It didn't give her any bleeding but it knocked her against the wall powerfully.

Hanako: Joekool! Crimson! Help me!
Joekool: How dare you!

Joekool jump kicked FalloutX2 but FalloutX2 used its metal arm and slung him against the wall. Joekool landed on Hanako.

Hanako: As if I wasn't already in pain!
Joekool: Sorry...

Crimson suddenly started prancing around.

Hanako: I think your pet is trying to tell us something.
Joekool: Charades was never one of my best games...
Hanako: Do the mind reading thing with him...

Joekool closed his eyes and started hugging Crimson.

Crimson: This is a dream!

Joekool jumped off Crimson in shock.

Joekool: You heard him! He told me that it's a dream!
Hanako: No... I didn't.

Suddenly someone walked into the room...

Hanako: Watashi!

Meanwhile, back at the nothern mountains, the fellowship wakes up and instantly realize Hanako and Joekool is missing one the smoke cleared up.

Naori: You guys! I think Marcus kidnapped Hanako and Joekool!
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Guys, please make them confront Marcus before they go searching and find the group. Like I said before, take your time with concentrating on Hanako.
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 8:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naori wrote:
right she isnt in the modern time frame.. i was state that joekool, watashi and hanako are from the modern time .. but hanako is known in the past time.. understand? and they are trying to go find out more about her identities and what is the current situation in their kingdom.


Oh, okay! I got it. Very Happy

Just for the records, I agree that these RPG should include rules, we nearly went crazy with some post in the past.
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PostPosted: Thu May 05, 2005 8:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

might i add.. please leave Naori and ryuu's character alone for now .. just add them in with normal dialect but dont give them something new.. i will develop those characters.. ^^v

you guys can pick characters you want to develop and just ask for help if you need ideas! hmm.. PM is a good way of getting new ideas before posting..

so far our writers are johnsmith, firetears, joekool, soaringair, falloutX2, lucifer, and myself. have fun.. and remember if someone is trying to develop a character dont screw them over with something bogus! XD peace!
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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 12:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A little request from me.......
Sorry, but may you guy dont put some thing new to the Dark Dragon Lord's action, i am thinking of developing another evil plot for the Dragon Lord after the Plot here with Hanako and Joekool is done.........

It will involve the Castle the followship is traveling to..............

THANK YOU ALL.......

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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

falloutX2 wrote:

Meanwhile

Fallout: * talking to Naori* where the heck did both of them go???

Naori: i don't know...

Fallout: don't worry..we'll find them...i'm sure of it...


Naori wrote:

Apparently they are in a dream sequence controlled by Kalua. But what happens in their dreams are happening in real life. They are bleeding to death and trapped within their own dreams.

Current situation hanako and joekool (joekool is a school boy in modern times and studies with hanako, mysterious gains the power to heal) is lost and is trapped within a dream.


Firetears wrote:

Suddenly someone walked into the room...

Hanako: Watashi!

Meanwhile, back at the nothern mountains, the fellowship wakes up and instantly realize Hanako and Joekool is missing one the smoke cleared up.

Naori: You guys! I think Marcus kidnapped Hanako and Joekool!


please read the post before you carefully, otherwise the story will go haywire.
THE POSTS DUN LINK

for example: i thought that naori already notice that hanako and joe is lost... so there shld not be a meanwhile that:~
'Meanwhile, back at the nothern mountains, the fellowship wakes up and instantly realize Hanako and Joekool is missing one the smoke cleared up. Naori: You guys! I think Marcus kidnapped Hanako and Joekool! '

'Being too late to call for help, he ran toward the escaping carriage and jumped on the back. After going a few miles away from the fellowship, he reached his hand into the carriage and managed to feel Hanako, which he instantly pulled her out of the carriage and they tumbled down a hill into a villiage...'
.............. okie is this part of the dream Question

hmmm i can guess that the fallout that FalloutX2 is talking abt is some1 else as the usually put his name in full like " FalloutX2 " and not just fallout!!!!! Wink
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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 2:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow...u read my mind..how did you know??? i wanted to let the new fallout say something like *quote from starwars* 'luke, i'm your father* i was not supposed to be a dream :p but whats passed is passed..too bad Sad
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so farewell my friends
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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 3:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

9. author's request for how a character should act or the next scene should act out may be requested in violet
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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well i am also blurred because of the watashi guy... but i supposed he appeared in the dream right?

as for how to continue... maybe someone should write whereby joekool prevented hanako from going towards watashi thus causing them to awaken? or maybe the phoenix could awaken them with it's powers...
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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2005 4:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, turning everything into a dream was a very bad idea because that's when people get lost. Just like soaringair asked, you can't even tell where the dream started. Sometimes when people post things, they need to think ahead of time for what a lot of author's might respond because some may get confused. Not trying to insult anyone or call anyone wrong, but I just wanted to make that statement. It starting to be more concentrated on when and where things happen other then continuing with the story. And yes, Watashi was supposed to be in the dream.

I'll try to cover everything from here on in to make things clear again.
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