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joekool
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 1:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is my first try! Pretty confusing but I suppose Hanamori is still in 1300 right?

Everyone then exited the cave. As they walked on, they saw a cemetry ahead.

Ryuu: Do we have to pass through this creepy place?

Firetears: We don't have much of choice do we?

Our heroes then walked into the cemetry with their weapons ready...

Lucifer: Did you guys hear something?

Yaski: Hey! If it's that old joke I ain't falling for it!

Naori: If it was the 'crack' sound behind then I think so...

Everyone turned and saw... an army of skeletons and zombies.

Lucifer: Protect her ladyship!

Lucifer then drew his lightsaber while Firetears prepared a spell to cast.

Lucifer then dashed forward, cutting down the undead swiftly. Just then a zombie jumped in the air and tried to grab Lucifer but a fireball flew from Firetears' hand and burnt the zombie.

Firetears: There's too many! Lucifer! I am gonna use a Firewall to hold them off!

Lucifer then jumped back allowing Firetears to cast a wall of fire which burned all that tried to past.

Suddenly 10 skeletal warriors appeared in front of them and prepared to attack Hanamori...
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol.... nice story!!! Laughing

Lucifer jumped right in front of Hanako and starts to fend off the attack from the 10 skeletal warriors, but the 10 skeletion warriors were the elites of the evil army and they quickly overwhelmed Lucifer, just as the lead warrior was about to kill Lucifer.... a beam destoryed all of the warriors, leaving Lucifer shocked....

Lucifer: what the heck was that supposed to be?!

FalloutX2: that was supposed to be my beam rifle...

fellowship: who the heck are u supposed to be?!

FalloutX2: i am a proto-type gundam ZETY 2569

fellowship: ........... and what the hect is that supposed to mean?

FalloutX2: (starts to reply but was hit by a torrent of fireballs from the skeletal mages)

fellowship: wow...that was quick...

FalloutX2: (was undamaged) Muhahaahhaaha, i am 100% fire proof and i and (gets cut off by a bunch of icebeams)

fellowship: (icebeam freezes FalloutX2)that guy have a time of response slower then a snail.....

FalloutX2: (ice breaks) Muhahahahahaha i was going to say i was also 100% cold proof

fellowship: thats one scary robot....

skeletal mages: ............
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it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 1:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ouch.......ohhhhh.........ohhhhhhhhh is hurts.............Sry, can't type anything for now, i was laughing like a donkey while reading what FalloutX2 wrote, ohhh....ohhhhh.....my stomic............hurts..................a lots................too.............................funny...........
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

opps sorry..i forgot to say that the "fellowship' includes everyone protecting Hanako and Hanako herself :p
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.... it's so hard to continue the story but i'll try to connect it.

Just when they were talking, another group of skeleton warriors spawned out of no where. FalloutX2 jumps in front to attack the skeletons and pulls out the beam rifle but an alarm went off saying "WARNING! Energy low.. PHASE SHIFT DOWN..." Before falloutX2 could fire the beam rifle, the PS armor went down and the beam rifle ran out of energy.

FalloutX2 : crap, forgot to charge my batteries. Never trust batteries made in China.

Then, falloutX2 dashes back before turning into scrap metal. Just when the gang was surrounded and have no where to run. Hanako's necklace shines once again turning the surrounding white and acts as a flashbang. Using his infrared vision, FalloutX2 guides the gang out of the cave...
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

As the gang ran on, the it seem that the skeleton warriors is still blind...but after a minute, the sounds of the thundering rage from the skeleton warriors seems closer and closer.......

FalloutX2: no good, the batteries cannot be charge...

Firetears: But it saids rechargable........see?.........right here...........

Lucifer: Hello!!!!! It's made in China!!!!!!!!!!!!duhhhhhhh...........

meanwhile, the gang is growing more and more tire, seems that most of them cannot hang on moch longer......

John: CHARGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the thundering sound of the skeleton warriors is soon being overcome by the sounds of the flaping wings of the HUGE Dragons.......

John: Find yourself a place to hide and hurry........ i don't want to make it looks like i am helping you guy here.......

the gangs were shocked by the amount of Dragons in the sky, it almost covered up the whole sky.... there must be a least 2 thousand of them!!!!

Lucifer: Is Sashimo really THAT powerful.........

John: GO!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 3:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

FalloutX2: if i could get my power back on....i could fly all of us outta this hell hole in no time at all....( nuclear fission pack on FalloutX2 turns on, oh ya..i forgot ,theres no n- jammers here!!!) PS armor up!!! hey all out u guys climb up on me, i got the power!!! YAHOGAAA

fellowship: maybe staying here is better.....

Lucifer: go go go, that robo saved my life...lets jus go or we'll be dead in 5 secs

Firetears: i'll create a shield...i think i will last for 5 mins...we got no time to lose now... gogogo!!!

FalloutX2: Fallout taking off!!!!

skeletal mages: WTF!!!! ( shoots fire ball and ice beam)

cuz of the few hundred balls and beams of energy..... the shield that Firetears create is destoryed... the assults fall on FalloutX2....

FalloutX2: i told ya i am 100% fire proof!!! then the passengers start screaming..oh ya...i forgot that the not like me...

John: i'll cover you..... ( a few thousand dragon flew under FalloutX2 and became a "human" shield as in dragon type of human shield...

FalloutX2: wow....they are 150% fire proof.....

fellowship: stop talking crap and fly.....

suddenly a void of darkness appeared in from of the fellowship.... the dark riders with their dragon steeds appeared in front of them and started firing elemental magic at them...

FalloutX2: how many time do i have to tell u... i am freaking everything proof!!!

fellowship: WE ARE NOT , IDIOT!!!

FalloutX2: opps so i forgot...

Naori: i will take care of this....

fellowship: ????

Naori takes out her staff( since nobody mentioned her weapon so i choose it) the power of light will conquer all darkness......
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it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 3:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*i thought i gave Naori a sword? whatever, the staff can be the secondary weapon and how big is FalloutX2 since he can enter the cave?*

With Naori's staff shining so bright, the dragon riders was unable to see with their eyes. With FalloutX2's infrared vision, they flew through the dragons leaving them way behind. After a while, everyone was coughing and starting to scratch their bodies.

FalloutX2 : What's wrong with you guys? i don't feel anything strange?

The rest : Of course! You are a freaking robot !

FalloutX2 : oh, i know! It's probably my nuclear jet pack is leaking..

The fellowship started to panicked but since there was a sea below them, they decided to jump off before they die of nuclear waste contamination... Luckily for them, there was land right in front of them. After some swimming, they reached the land and FalloutX2 also lands safely.

A swordsman approaches the gang and identifies himself as Joekool, the best swordsman in the galaxy. With his magic skill, he then heals the gang, turning everybody back to healthy status.

FalloutX2 : I have better switch off my nuclear jet pack or else you guys might die faster than being killed by zombies...

The rest GLARES at FalloutX2....
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 4:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

the gangs : are there two nucleur jet pack? cause there are two spot that is leaking right now.......

Joekool : No, if you paid close attention, there are 5 other spot that is leaking....

Fallout : .............................. i haven't repair myself since last year, so let me see what can i do to myself...........

*there's a huge explosion by FalloutX2, his head flew about 30 feet into the ocean...*

while the followship are looking for Fallout's head, there's another huge explosion coming from the Remain(head-less) of falloutX2......the gangs turned around, hoping the body would blown to bits so they don't have to look for the head anymore......But saddly, it wasn't the annoring Robot.......
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey!!! u destoryed my dear gundam!!! nvm i'll repair it Cool

the explosion was not technically an explosion since it was created by a time rift created by a person that delivers things....

deliveryman: is mr FalloutX2 here???

fellowship: u looking for his head or his body....

deliveryman: both??

fellowship: you see...he exploded and i think u know the rest of the story..

deliveryman: now i know what the no-leak nuclear reactor, and the spare head is know.... hmm lemme think if i'm not wrong the AL of this robo is not in his head... in other words...he can be saved!!!

fellowship: awww...do you have to save him???

deliveryman: of course..i'm from FED UP ... we leave to deliver, destory, desecrate, and repair.....

fellowship:( draws weapon) do you really have to Twisted Evil

deliveryman: i have too

Hanako: aww, i can't do it...this guy is only doing his job...

after a few hours of working... FalloutX3 is here

FalloutX3: Muhahahahaha, i am now 500% anything proof and i got 2 times my reflexes

Lucifer: great.....here we go again

Firetear: two time zero is still equals to zero...

FalloutX3: i'll pretend i never heard taht

Naori: we have to get Hanako to a safe palce soon...

FalloutX3: leave it to me!!!

fellowship: do we have to?

Lucifer: i see the dark dragons comming and we're fried if they do...

FalloutX3: how many time do i have to tell u that i am 500% anything proof!!

fellowship: how many time do we have to tell u that we're not..

FalloutX3: i forget...again

Naori: too late to run now..5 secs till they come into range...
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it was hard leaving here,
but the seas call to me
and the skies beckon
so farewell my friends
and may we meet again

later....
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 7:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hanako: Ahhhh!
Yaski: Hanako!

Yaski runs toward Hanako from the back of the cave to the front and notice Dark Dragons surrounding her. He jumps into the air and kick the dark dragon in the face, making it cause a rampage. Ryuu appears from the back.

Ryuu: What's going on?
Yaski: Are you blind.....
Ryuu: No! Are you! I'm just trying to ask a question.
Yaski: Oh right! You come in the back of the cave and see a rampaging dragon and you got the nerve to ask where it comes from... Your a real freakin' genius! Not!
Ryuu: Riiight! And your supposed to be Einstien in the past!
Hanako: Guys! I think you all are forgetting that I'm the center of attention!

Firetears, Lucifer, Naomi, and John Smith appear from the back.

John: Guys! There's dark dragons everywhere!
Ryuu and Yaski: Ya think!
Naomi: Aren't you supposed to be leader of the dragon knights?
John: Not these ones! These aren't ordinary dragons, they are actually created by dark forces.
Naomi: You know a lot...
John: No duh! I am a spy! Think next time!

John gave Naomi a small pluck on the head.

Naomi: Ouch!

Lucifer jumps toward the dragon that held Hanako against the wall and hit him in the head. Firetears let out fire blast to hold off some of the dark dragons heading toward the cave. Suddenly a large blue blast came form no where and blew all the dragons off into the ocean. It was coming from FalloutX2.

Firetears: ( Whispers ) Show-off...
FalloutX2: What?
Firetears: ( Rubbing the back of his head ) Oh... ~Nervous Laughter~ Nothing!

Suddenly a great blue blast appeared and nearly blinded everyone. Once the light dimmered, a figure of an old woman stood in place.

Naomi: Dark Queen Verna?!?!
Dark Queen Verna: Good guess Naomi! How'd ya know?
FalloutX2: Dark Queen? That's enough for me to know it's time for you to go!

FalloutX2 fires a huge blast at Dark Queen Verna.

John: Damn! Not a scratch!
Firetears: ( Whispers in John Smith's ear ) Mmmhmm! Not that tough after all.
John: ~Digging his ear in his finger~ I think you just melted my ear wax...
FalloutX2: How the hell?!?!
Dark Queen Verna: You... FalloutX2? You are surely one of the strongest out of this entire group...
FalloutX2: Damn skippy!
Dark Queen Verna: Tell me... Why do you choose to come from the far future into this era to protect such a group? Why not you really care for others? Why just attack?
FalloutX2: I came for research and I'm a robot! I have no feelings... Only judgement. Attack and kill!
Dark Queen Verna: Oh! I see! Your selfishness has now caused the elements of water and fire to reverse.
Lucifer: Uhhh... English?
Dark Queen Verna: You are now going to become a human with feelings and a heart. No longer will you be selfish toward others if you want to return to your current undestructable from. You still have a 1/4 of your powers, but that's only at the maximum...
FalloutX2: You bitch! How dare you?!?!

FalloutX2 then goes into a huge beam of light that temporarily blinds everyone. Once the light dimmered, FalloutX2 was a human.

Naomi: Where did she go?
Lucifer: She obviously left...
Naomi: No! Not her! Hanako!
Ryuu: Gosh! We were so selfish! She already told me and Yaski how we aren't even protecting her anymore. I guess she figured she'd be better off on her own.
John: Were we all ignoring her that much?
Naomi: How can I? After the lord's orders... I disobeyed him... We all did...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Okay, I'm finally done. Actually, I did this LONG portiohn of the story just to put things back on track because things were getting to complicated. Plus, just in case people were late to the story and didn't want to read through the entire story, I put all of this to remind them of everyone in the story and all. Fear not folks, I'm not going to be typing long chapters like this on a regular.


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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 8:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

but, but..........firetears...........

john is suppose to be the spy of Sashimo also the leader of the dragon knights, so he wouldn't be fighting his own troop of dragons...........

nor would he be talking to the gangs that freely because Sashimo doesn't trust anyone and might be spying on him right now..........
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Even the leader of dark dragons? As in, evil bad dragons out to kill everyone under the order of their leader.
Also, you weren't talking to use that much. Firetears was actually talking to you and you insulted him by practically saying he has hot breath. I trust people too fast anyway, so it makes sense.
I'll just edit it so it'll make sense to people.
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ahhhhh i c............ Shocked Shocked Shocked
sry firetears............. Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
Now i got it Idea Idea Idea
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

actually i never plan to appear in the story yet... but i guess i'll make an appearance soon...

Now that the fellowship had some time to rest, Joekool decided to talk to Hanamori.

Joekool:Hanako-senpai.

Hanako: Joe? No wonder I felt that I know you! How did you get here?

Joekool: Well... it happened like this

~Flashback~

Joekool's POV

It's been over a week since Hanako-senpai is missing... no one seems to care... I wonder why? People act like she didn't exist at all. But I believe she did exist! All those times during kendo practise weren't fake! They were all real!

Normal POV

Joekool then walked his way to same place where Hanako was last seen. He then noticed some marks on the slope of the hill.

Joekool: Hanako-senpai might have fallen down...

Joekool then heads down the hill and spots a river.

Joekool:Could she have been swept by the river?

Joekool then heads down along the riverbank looking for clues. He then spots Hanako's hair clip on a rock in the centre of the river. He wades in and picks it up.

Suddenly a vortex appears and sucks him in.

Joekool:WTF?! I feel like I am in an anime!

Suddenly everything went black for Joekool

~end of flashback~

Joekool: When I woke up, I was in a cabin with an old man. The old man healed me back. It seems like this world gives us powers when we come from the other side to here. For an instance, I have healing powers... Anyways I plan to bring senpai back home.

Hanako: You mean that one week has past!?

Joekool: Yeah I thought it was weird! But another weird thing is that, I was transferred here one week ago and when I got here I tried searching for you for over 3 days. That was when a stream of light came down from the sky. Thus I followed that light till I found you.

Hanako: The time here seems to be weird...

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like i said i never plan to come in the story but since Lucifer inserted me, I had to make do... hope this is acceptable
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