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eternalcurses Heimin (Commoner)

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sayoku EviL DoLL

Joined: Jul 22, 2005 Posts: 8164 Location: la la land
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:46 am Post subject: |
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the eyes are mongulated, and i dont like the hair, but the shape of the face is nice. _________________ "Look at me, with my pretty bracelet and tiara... I'm a fuckin' princess!"
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1ce Retired Forumer

Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
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| Needs some work on shaping of the face and positioning on the ears; otherwise, good job. |
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CGY Jigoku Sensei

Joined: Apr 30, 2005 Posts: 13130 Location: The depth of hell...
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Can't say they are good. Need improvement on the hair and mouth of the first drawing, hair and eyes on the second one. |
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eternalcurses Heimin (Commoner)

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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 1:57 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for your honest opinions it's the only way I'll imrpove. _________________
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Cephadeath Conscript

Joined: Jun 18, 2005 Posts: 141 Location: Lost in the fabric of space and time.... in other words, the kitchen drapes.
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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Well, it's good and all, but, Ur goin' for more of a realism kinda scence, the eyes are like halfway between normal and anime, and the mouth on the second is anime, on the first, it's uhm, just, dont draw lips.....EVER.... but the hair is, frankly, again half anime, half what it is in real life.... The ears are pretty good. I would say, don't try and make anime, try to make a "realism" kinda' thing.... IT wud suit ur style much better....
The head shape and the shoulders are good tho.... _________________ [IMG:350:204:b5e314c893]http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e42/xX_ZIGGY_Xx/milk.gif[/img:b5e314c893]
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trailofinsects newbie!

Joined: Jul 23, 2005 Posts: 11
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 10:44 am Post subject: |
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| my feedback is as thus... go learn the basic anatomy ar...it'll be easier henceforth..trust me... even for manga the basic still lies in anatomy... keep it up dude |
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