Anime Girl... What do you think?

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

Well this is an example of what I can draw (and paint Rolling Eyes

). I don't know how to color with computer programs but I'll learn^^! For now, I'll just paint with crayons! Laughing

I noticed that the body and hair aren't right but ,yeah, I'll improve with time! Wink

I don't know where did I got the idea for her clothes. I'm not sure but I think I saw in the Anime "Aika" (or something like that) that uniform... Shocked

Anyways, what do you think? Very Happy

Teiku · newbie! Joined: May 07, 2005 Posts: 5

dasthegreen · Naginata Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 505

its a good drawing, you have your own sense of style and so..keep up the good work.

onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

yawp, its a very good work if u ignore the fact taat the body iskinda weird and stuffs. im sure u'll turn out to be great if when u improve!
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elfinseer · newbie! Joined: May 04, 2005 Posts: 29

great art work, i cant believe its only cranyons and the coloring are so smooth and even... Very Happy

its alwsome

LoneWolf325 · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 11:52 am Post subject:

Not bad. You colored that with crayons!? impressive.

Hands look a bit awkward, head is a little out-of proportion, and the angle of her back makes her body thicker front/back than left/right. This is all fairly understandable, since it's a pretty awkward angle. Shirt sleeves are wrinkled nicely, the dress seems more like the beginner's "I know it's supposed to wrinkle, but I don't know how, so I'll just add crease lines." I still do this, actually.

I don't think the second highlight in the hair is necissary. and her eyes make her look afraid.

Excellent overall quality. Like to see more of your work soon.
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Dan0989 · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 6:33 pm Post subject:

I like it and that’s really impressive that you did that with crayons, keep it up Very Happy

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Issho · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 7:47 pm Post subject:

Whoa, crayons? Wonderful.

kiwifruitjuice · newbie! Joined: May 11, 2005 Posts: 4

whoa akashi not bad

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

Thanks everyone for your complimets and critics to help me to improve! And thanks LoneWolf325 who has great eyes to do such an excellent criticism Laughing

, thanks that did helped me out. Very Happy

And

Wow, I tought my crayons coloring skills were average but I guess I didn't noticed how much I improved. Rolling Eyes

the_underdog · Posted: Sat May 14, 2005 11:58 pm Post subject:

I agree with Lonewolf. The fingers on her right hand are a bit fat in some places and the dresses wrinkles are unrealistic. If you need help drawing wrinkles, study how your own clothes wrinkle when you wear them or look at how mangaka draw theirs.
Otherwise, its a good drawing. This looks good with crayons. I also lack knowledge (and the software to gain that knowledge) of coloring on a computer. T.T

Raiviin · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 17, 2005 Posts: 55

You're very smooth with crayons. The fingers are kind of fat, and the body is slightly out of porportion at the front, but the hair colouring is good.

LiangZzZ · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:23 am Post subject:

very nice! She looks rather cute! Cool

tsehong · newbie! Joined: May 18, 2005 Posts: 15

CGY · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 5:41 pm Post subject:

Pretty good.