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Haiyami · newbie! Joined: Jul 25, 2004 Posts: 23

A soldier girl. Kawaii de shou ne?

Ooh doesn't she look like she's rar'n for a fight?

_KyLa_ · newbie! Joined: May 12, 2005 Posts: 7 Location: -ERROR-

Cooool ones n_n
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dasthegreen · Naginata Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 505

good but you could use a little work on the whole region from the neck up as well as hands. otherwise you have the definate shape down and there is much potential. far more than ill ever have Mad

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 2:08 pm Post subject:

Heh, looking nice. I'm really liking the shading there.

However, your fingers seem a bit too huge and blocky. It's hard (believe me, I know), but try your best to make them a bit more anatomically correct.

As for the hair...eh, I think you should practice just a bit on that. Smile

Definately on the right track, though. Keep it up.

CGY · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 2:11 pm Post subject:

Pretty good. Except the facial expression. (No offense)

Woah77 · Conscript Joined: Apr 08, 2005 Posts: 172

nice... but a smile might be nice as well

Nasvea · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 8:29 pm Post subject:

yes this is nice but the neck looks a bit too small and the hands look a bit awkward. other then that your artwork is rather nice.

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

They look pretty nice. Of course you could work more the details such as the hair and hands (I know it's hard Rolling Eyes

). But you have great potential. Good job^^

koex · newbie! Joined: May 17, 2005 Posts: 10

yeah, a smile might be nice

xxvietf00lxx · Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 6:39 pm Post subject:

yeah i would think the neck is out of portion but otherwise i think everything looks pretty nice...
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LiangZzZ · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:22 am Post subject:

try to do a slight touch-up on the eyes and more detail on the hair, and it will be great!

DarkTears · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:28 am Post subject: wow

impresive.............indeed.it is really good and i really like the facial expression to natural lol........seriously i hate smiling faces cause they seem fake! u did a relly good peace of art right there!