My first coloring thingy

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11

was wondering if some one could give me some tips on how to improve.. especially the line and the hair part >.>

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

Let's see... maybe you could add some shading to the skin... and maybe you could fix the lines of her body^^. Aside that's, it's pretty great. Good job Laughing

the_underdog · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 12:08 am Post subject:

yeah, shading and better lines would make this pic even better

AHA · newbie! Joined: May 15, 2005 Posts: 3

to be thinned
but i like it very much Wink

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11

alright ^^ I'll try to shade it more and post when I'm done.. thanks for the feed back

dasthegreen · Naginata Ashigaru Joined: Apr 06, 2005 Posts: 505

i think its good, though shading could use a bit of work i find no problem with it.

Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Everyone has their shading style but maybe you can use a line drag trick to outline the hair itself alittle better.... sorta looks like the hair is inconsistent from top to bottom in some spots.

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11

line drag trick??
*Is pretty new with adobe photoshop*

could you explain a bit more please Embarassed

LiangZzZ · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:24 am Post subject:

not bad, but try to add more shades and tones to the picture to make it more attractive Cool

DarkTears · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:35 am Post subject: personally i like it!

i relly love the color u r talented!

CGY · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 5:46 pm Post subject:

Did you draw that? I thought you copy from somewhere. If it is done by you, then you are amazing!!!

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11

unfortunately I didn't draw this one *smiles*

if I did I'd be drawing/coloring a lot more... heh...

this ones the cover page for chapter 40 pastel

*will post a new pic when I'm finally done with my work*

sigh.. all work and no play...

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11

my new one... working on the eyes still tho... not quite there yet =(

CGY · Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 3:43 pm Post subject:

You sure you didn't copy from somewhere?

Man, you are way too good!!!!!

Nice!!!!

iesnek · newbie! Joined: Apr 25, 2005 Posts: 11