my artsies

Kinlyu · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 4:58 pm Post subject: my artsies

I've got some art - both fanart and original stuff on deviantart.

These are some of them ^^

Count Cain (from the manga by Kaori Yuki)

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

Nice! You did a great job in the third drawing. Surprised

The body of the first guy somehow doesn't seem right tough. The left arm is a bit bigger and the bone is sticking out too much... And his belly is kind of too long. But then again, he could be also tall, right? Rolling Eyes

Anyways, great job. Very Happy

Hiddencamela · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 82

Some good art work there!
Have you experimented with different shading?
Some darker shading in some areas would give the characters more depth.

Kinlyu · Posted: Mon May 16, 2005 11:08 am Post subject:

- The first one's upper body is a bit too long, but I noticed too late (as always Very Happy

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- I should be more daring with my shading... I will try in my next drawing ^^

Thanks! ^^

Raiviin · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 17, 2005 Posts: 55

It may just be me, but I think the legs in the last picture are a bit too thin. Could be just me though. Good work!

LiangZzZ · Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:23 am Post subject:

I like the textures of the drawings, they are so smooth and appealing to the eyes... Good artwork! Cool

Kinlyu · Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 10:58 am Post subject:

True, the legs look a bit thin, even though one leg is placed before the other...

This guy is my latest work, and second try on photoshop ^^ I'm pretty proud of the hair- even though he needed some more on the back of the head-, wich is done entirely in pen ^^

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18394802/

Also, please visit my [url:http://kinlyu.deviantart.com/gallery]DA gallery[/url] ^^ It would make me happy to get some more people to see and comment my art - I do still need improvement and constructieve criticism can only help! Wink

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Spikergurl_29 · newbie! Joined: May 20, 2005 Posts: 14

I think the pictures are great! You're a very good artist.
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Nasvea · Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 11:34 pm Post subject:

Hmm... the first one looks nice but the torso area is a bit small.. the second was better but the folds of the clothing didnt look all too natural... the 3rd was really great..but yeah his legs looked a bit small.