Air Gear fan art!

Coben · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 13, 2005 Posts: 55

Here's some air gear fanart i did last week Smile

And also a half bleach fanart. I did an other face-form but i kinda
like how it turned out.

Please tell me what you think and what i can improve! Smile

ThaMahin · Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 11:22 pm Post subject:

Coben your pictures looks really great.you have great talent. I am no great artist but ill just say somethings that Caught my eyes. You know the whistle in the first picture you need to detail it more thats the only thing. Man you pictures are sooooo KEWL.It would be great if I could draw like you. How long have you been drawing for?

For the second picture the eye pupils doesn't match and the right arm seems a lil bit too skinny compare to the left arm.Overall you picture are great i cant help but comment on you artistic ability.
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zealous · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 24, 2005 Posts: 56

You can work on the shady...overall it's good Wink

CGY · Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 3:40 pm Post subject:

Way to go!!!!!!! Cool stuffs!!!!!!

But it looks like that Ichigo guy from bleach.

Coben · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 13, 2005 Posts: 55

Thank you for your nice feed back Very Happy

And btw, it's ichigo from bleach.. But a little modificated.. Hehe
I said that it was a fan art Wink

xxvietf00lxx · Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 12:39 pm Post subject:

hahahah its looks great! keep it up
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daisuki_dark_angel · newbie! Joined: May 27, 2005 Posts: 9

You have some great talent and dont take this the wrong way but i want to give you some pointers.
i also draw but am way to shy to post.
but the things i wanted to tell you were that you should incorparate wind into your pic and make the hair move in that direction.this wont just add authenticity but make it look really great.but also move his coller in the wind 's direction too.

and try drawing it in a thick inky pen.
and dont just use any paper when using ink.
buy cartridge paper becuase it absorbs the ink really good and will avoid smudging.

daisuki_dark_angel · newbie! Joined: May 27, 2005 Posts: 9

ohh and if you wanna talk to me or say something like *you baka !! think you can tell me how to draw!!!* just message me lol.
i would really like to get to know a fellow drawer further.

Phixa · newbie! Joined: May 20, 2005 Posts: 32

good job i'm not much of an artist myself but i love look at other people's work :p i like the bleach one the best lol keep it up!

Coben · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 13, 2005 Posts: 55

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xingxing · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 07, 2005 Posts: 51

the faces are a bit too kiddish =]P try to draw them as more mature guys ~~ ^__~

LiangZzZ · Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 10:43 pm Post subject:

Yeah it does resembles a bit of Bleach, but nice drawing!