Well, am I improving?

eternalcurses · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 17, 2005 Posts: 61

I made this pick of Inu Yasha, I hope you like it. Comments are welcome (good or bad) as long as you explain why. This is the only way I'll improve. Thanks Very Happy

here's the link http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y85/eternalcurses/inu.jpg
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onizukapwns · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Jul 15, 2004 Posts: 247 Location: 42

as a novice, good. something about this picture looks "right". face is nice.

but if im to be more criticizing, i'd say you have a lot of areas that are in need of improvement. body and form, clothing, folds, and maybe hair (but i think hair's okay for now)
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eternalcurses · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 17, 2005 Posts: 61

Thanks, this is the kind of comment I like to hear.
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LiangZzZ · Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 8:28 am Post subject:

not bad, but the face needs to be drawn better though Wink

Akashi · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 08, 2005 Posts: 53

I like it!^^
Hm.. Surprised

maybe his neck and wrist are too thin^^ but that could also your style of Art. Very Happy

Maybe you could also work a bit more in the clothes and maybe if you improved your shading skills then would look even better. Laughing

Beyond that it look very good!^^
Smile

Keep up the good job and I also want to see some more Art of yours! XD

DarkTears · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:10 pm Post subject:

nice as a novice pretty good! Wink

well.......the thing is the face is a little bit crocket from the body the hands need a little bit more work but i did like it! Wink

Zellron · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:47 pm Post subject:

I thought it was good...

Practice is great. Try breaking it down into shapes.

oldskldoood · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 11, 2005 Posts: 89

its alrite

GumWai · Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 12:52 am Post subject:

i would work on shading abit more......
but anywho good start
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mvrckbass · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 02, 2005 Posts: 60

*holds up three cards*
USA 8
Russia 9
Japan 4 *clunk* err we mean 8

I really like it. I'm curious to where his other hand is. Laughing

Keep it up.

xingxing · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: May 07, 2005 Posts: 51

=O the 3 card thingy was a cool idea ! hahah and yaa i agree with that person =D you're definitely improving ^__~

GrimReaper1 · Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:11 pm Post subject:

the face is kind of small, and there are some errors in the cloth, shape of the body, the sword and in the hand, i mean, in everything, but they're not major errors... the drawing is good for a novice

I used to draw like this when i started, some parts of the body were bigger or smaller than they should be and the cloth was a bit bad...

this site will help you a lot, at least it helped me http://drawsketch.about.com/gi/dynamic/offsite.htm?zi=1/XJ&sdn=drawsketch&zu=http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/tutorial/tutorial.html i'm not sure if the site is working, my internet is kind of slow right now and it is taking a lot of time to open the website...[/url]

amagaeru · Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:28 am Post subject:

Good for a start; keep up the work.

extremegamer · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:44 pm Post subject:

its a good start but need to work an the shading and sizing alittle
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aria1120 · newbie! Joined: Jul 07, 2005 Posts: 33

Neat! I like it, it's good for a novice!