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Emerald_Mara85
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Kaijiin
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| they all look great and the dance baby is awesome, i just don't like much the shoulders and mouth of the first one |
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Mates
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| Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:35 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, nice done my friend.
The last chick is hot   |
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CGY
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| Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 1:40 pm Post subject: |
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| They are pretty good, considering the fact that I know none of them. |
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Emerald_Mara85
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Kaijiin= Oh really? Haha don't know...I kinda like the mouth, maybe I should put less broad shoulders? I'll see!
Mates=Wow, thanks. I'm really proud with Dance Baby Dance. I actually wanted to make her more revealing...hahaha. Maybe some more different costumes!
CGY=Arigato! Don't know Shadow Hearts? If you're an Rpg fan, go and play the game! |
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kenshin777
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| Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 2:40 am Post subject: |
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| Emerald_Mara85 wrote: |
Kaijiin= Oh really? Haha don't know...I kinda like the mouth, maybe I should put less broad shoulders? I'll see!
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I really don't think it's the mouth so much as the shadow for the nose that makes it look a little awkward ... but other than that they are all quite impressive |
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MrConfused
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| Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 2:47 am Post subject: |
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| That's some pretty nice art, other then minor stuff there's not much wrong here |
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winryrockbell
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| Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 11:31 pm Post subject: |
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| Wow! They're all really nice! XD You've got mad skills! Keep up the excelletn work! XD |
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eternalcurses
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The only criticism I have is the position of the first pics nose but apart from that WOWZA those are really really good.
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Doukutsu-Monogatari
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| Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 2:45 pm Post subject: |
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Nice.
Your grasp on anatomy in the last picture is astounding. Keep up the great work. |
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CGY
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:48 am Post subject: |
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| Needs improvement on the face and fingers. But pretty good anyway! |
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clowreed
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:09 pm Post subject: |
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| awesome ^^ keep the good work |
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senmuyoshi
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 4:38 pm Post subject: |
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| Looks good, nice details in the clothes, neat hair, but the nose throws the whole thing off |
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Emerald_Mara85
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| Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 11:30 am Post subject: |
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| senmuyoshi wrote: |
| Looks good, nice details in the clothes, neat hair, but the nose throws the whole thing off |
Err... thanks guys!
I did the nose that way to follow shadow... |
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senmuyoshi
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| Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="Emerald_Mara85"]
| senmuyoshi wrote: |
| I did the nose that way to follow shadow... |
Ah I see. I was just looking for consistency I suppose. You should have shaded it the same why the rest of the drawing was. I think it would have made the face flow better with the body. |
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