quick sketches - on paper n artpad

ed0kun · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71

randomsketches
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20113436/
randomsketches close up 1
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20113506/
randomsketches close up 2
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20113557/

and heres a quick artpad sketch
http://artpad.art.com/?ij1031fgzuo random guy (pencil)

Sangreal · newbie! Joined: Jun 30, 2005 Posts: 9

pretty cute..needs some work though..

Dan0989 · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:57 pm Post subject:

There pretty good. I would say that you should put more detail into them, but since they are sketches I can understand the lack of detail. Keep it up Very Happy

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CGY · Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:41 am Post subject:

Those sketches are pretty good!

eye-stein · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 1:36 am Post subject:

no offense here...but keep the good work comin'
.....heh :idea:
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lipsmacker · Conscript Joined: Jun 10, 2005 Posts: 122

thsese sketches are good
good job

extremegamer · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:39 pm Post subject:

Pretty Good. Need detail and a little work. Pretty Good
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Jsy3k · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:17 pm Post subject:

Good sketches, but need improvement on your technique. Some of the faces features can be improved and your lining technique too. Other than that, good work!!
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ed0kun · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71

hmm interesting thx for the critique
what facial features should b improved?
also is the lining cuz its not dark?

come check out my hand drawn in my art thread when im done with it(shud b really soon)

lemme kno wut i can improve from there since its a more finished one

neway latezz

lipsmacker · Conscript Joined: Jun 10, 2005 Posts: 122

it's a good start, keep posting

Defcom2000 · newbie! Joined: Jul 09, 2005 Posts: 27

Its a nice start

Jsy3k · Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 9:08 am Post subject:

The lining is a bit thick for some parts. Try to use a thinner ones first before darkening the outline that you want to darken.

For the facial expression, maybe you can use some references from www.boyis.com. It just felt strange for the face. I think it is the proportion, but I could be wrong.
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ed0kun · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Apr 03, 2005 Posts: 71

yeah the lining on paper isnt really as thick as it appears Sad

the cellfone pic blurs the image, making the lines appear messier and sometimes the angle of the image distorts proportions T_T

anyway thanks alot, ill check that site out

doujo · Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 3:09 pm Post subject:

I think these sketches are great. You're good in artpad, my drawings artpad just suck Laughing

Aiyaka · Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 8:25 pm Post subject:

um...
not bad in fact it pretty good hii...!! Rolling Eyes

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