A shot in the dark sketch...

vaLyim · newbie! Joined: Jun 14, 2005 Posts: 23

So, it's my first shot at a drawing that's supposed to look like someone - Sakura from Tsubasa Chronicle. What do the folks here think? (And, can I get some suggestions for improvement, please?)

Doukutsu-Monogatari · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 11:44 pm Post subject:

The face and hair are great. I'm not liking the pointy chin, though --- might want to round that up a bit.

The neck...er. I think you ought to practice on the position/shape.

Nice, though. Keep at it.

ladyarakune · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 12:48 am Post subject:

its REALLY good. suggestions? thats hard, again, the chin, and maybe a bit more detail on the inside of the ear. ino, the ears are really awkward to draw, but a little detail goes along way.
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Jsy3k · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:16 am Post subject:

Nice sketch for first timers. I can't even get that when I first drew few years back (Now no more though Sad

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Hmmm, I can't comment much for the hair and the eyes since they are already very good. The ear looks a bit strange. Too little things there. Either erase the ears like it is covered by the hair, or add a bit more details into the ear.

Face shape is good. The pointy chin is OK, but if can, try to make it less pointy. It will be much better.

I think that is all. Hope to see your art again soon, vaLyim.
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sayoku · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:31 am Post subject:

fix the chin. the eyes and hair are great, just the chin.
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CGY · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 11:43 am Post subject:

The chin and the mouth. Overall, great, great drawing! I especially like the hair style!

Aznoutlaw · Yari Ashigaru Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 232

Yes fix the chin a bit and it'l be great. Nice job by the way Smile

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1ce · Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:24 am Post subject:

Good-Decent work on the head and face, but needs some work sizing and positioning the neck. The ear also needs some detail, but overall - Good Drawing.

sylvie · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 08, 2005 Posts: 59

I think you should fix the chin and the lip, everything else is perfect... good job...

Akazu · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 15, 2005 Posts: 61

Good job only you need to fix the mouth area
other than that.. its cool!

Riina · newbie! Joined: Aug 22, 2005 Posts: 24

hey thats a really cute pic!

dougal · newbie! Joined: Aug 21, 2005 Posts: 24

wow thats really nice, the eyes are really good. looks fine to me! Smile

Youkai_Flame · Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:03 pm Post subject:

ehh... other than the neck and chin... very good!! maybe practice flattening out the chin slightly
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Ryuya · Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 4:36 pm Post subject:

i no u have heard this over and over again, but i think that u should fix up the chin and the mouth, i think u should also do something about the long eyebrows as well. other than that, i think it looks great.(no offense or anything) hope u show us some more of your art work. i think that, since thats a begginers work, that its really good.
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CC65 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 30, 2005 Posts: 50

aside from the chin it's really good