I realy don't draw that much..but..(:

Chompi · newbie! Joined: Aug 23, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: Europ

I'm not realy proportional... Crying or Very sad

this is lame
and this one..Lame too

My scanner realy stress the eyes.

P.S. srry for my lame english..haha[/b]

CGY · Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:58 pm Post subject:

Can't really see the second one, too ligh! Well, I like the sad looking of the first picture, it's pretty good!

sayoku · Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:37 pm Post subject:

yeah it was a bit too light. should work on the eyes a bit more. overall is alright.
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KamiNoSeigi · Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:38 pm Post subject:

I think they look really nice, keep up the good work

Youkai_Flame · Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:25 am Post subject:

nice!! keep up the good work!! if u keep going, you'll progress into better art!
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Chompi · newbie! Joined: Aug 23, 2005 Posts: 13 Location: Europ

Tnx
but i think i already stoped drawing..
haaha my lazyness
i only like to draw little things..u kno.?(:

xacidicx · newbie! Joined: Mar 29, 2005 Posts: 18

They're alright, I like them. Better than what I can do. I suck at drawing. ^^ Just keep at it, and possibly make it a little darker, and you'll get better.
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JaniX · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Aug 17, 2005 Posts: 62

You should make the lines a little "harder" or whatever you should call it, work the eyes. Otherwise its quite good^^ Though it's nothing really wrong with the eyes just that it can be much better. Razz

1ce · Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:00 pm Post subject:

Its pretty good for starters if you're an inexperienced artist.
Its better than anything I can come up with so its great in my books Very Happy

Keep up the good efforts!

winryrockbell · Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:40 am Post subject:

don't put down your own work. and they're not that lame. i mean it's pretty good. but i think maybe their faces are too pointy. make their chins rounder. and your English isn't that lame either.