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Here's some poems of mine.
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Do U like them?
Yes!
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No!
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Ryuya
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Joined: Jun 06, 2005
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

--My Life is Like a Flower--

My life is like a flower.
We both have power.
A flower loves the sun.
I like to run.
For a flower, rain makes its day.
For me, not in the same way.

My life is like a flower.
We both have power.
The breeze is cold on my knees.
I hope a flower will not freeze.
It's a beautiful day.
I think I'll play.

Here's another poem of mine, I did it a while back but i finally found it. Hope you like it.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 3:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i say its cute.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 11:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

here i got a poem.

Love...
another word for sacrifice.
another reason it hurts.
In days of mists nd hollow emtion.
The clouds moving ever so slow.
A gentle autume breeze blow.
Simple words seems to past me by.
Only an images of you burns inside of my mind.


what do you think. i'm a lover not fighter
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that's a great poem Full-Metal. It deffiently sounds like ur a lover and not a fighter. hehe
thx for the comments everyone, I love how some ppl actually comment instead of just looking at them and leaving.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

overall no, i like the first one, flowing and nice about life, but the other two were just blehhhh. dont know any other way to describe them
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

nice poems! I vote for yes! keep up the good work! ^_^
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