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Ryuya Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jun 06, 2005 Posts: 61 Location: The Moon
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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--My Life is Like a Flower--
My life is like a flower.
We both have power.
A flower loves the sun.
I like to run.
For a flower, rain makes its day.
For me, not in the same way.
My life is like a flower.
We both have power.
The breeze is cold on my knees.
I hope a flower will not freeze.
It's a beautiful day.
I think I'll play.
Here's another poem of mine, I did it a while back but i finally found it. Hope you like it. _________________ If hatred can kill, then love can save us..
If love can kill, then hatred can save us.
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sayoku EviL DoLL

Joined: Jul 22, 2005 Posts: 8164 Location: la la land
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 3:05 am Post subject: |
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i say its cute. _________________ "Look at me, with my pretty bracelet and tiara... I'm a fuckin' princess!"
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Full-Metal Punished by admin (points deducted)

Joined: Aug 15, 2005 Posts: 57
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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here i got a poem.
Love...
another word for sacrifice.
another reason it hurts.
In days of mists nd hollow emtion.
The clouds moving ever so slow.
A gentle autume breeze blow.
Simple words seems to past me by.
Only an images of you burns inside of my mind.
what do you think. i'm a lover not fighter _________________ -"History is much like an endless waltz. The three beats of war,peace, and revolution continue on forever."
-"Peace is nothing but a result of war."
-"Then I'll give you just one piece of advice....dying hurts like hell." |
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Ryuya Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jun 06, 2005 Posts: 61 Location: The Moon
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:50 pm Post subject: |
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I think that's a great poem Full-Metal. It deffiently sounds like ur a lover and not a fighter. hehe
thx for the comments everyone, I love how some ppl actually comment instead of just looking at them and leaving. _________________ If hatred can kill, then love can save us..
If love can kill, then hatred can save us.
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joiner Conscript

Joined: Oct 19, 2005 Posts: 104
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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| overall no, i like the first one, flowing and nice about life, but the other two were just blehhhh. dont know any other way to describe them |
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blue_bee_pie newbie!

Joined: Oct 27, 2005 Posts: 11
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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| nice poems! I vote for yes! keep up the good work! ^_^ |
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