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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 3:57 am Post subject: Ichigo 100% photoshop edit by a newbie |
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Hi all,
i have posted this picture before, accidentally in someone elses topic.
Sorry!
that why, iam start a new topic on my own.
pls visit the website to view the picture that i edited and post some comments.
http://www.zorpia.com/cgi/photo.cgi?5832685.4644d6
i am new to photoshop and this is my first edit done.
i colored the picture and tried to get rid of all the noise and dots.
Pls support me!
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Sperz Conscript

Joined: Sep 03, 2005 Posts: 196 Location: KL, Malaysia
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 4:04 am Post subject: |
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basically u done a great job there for the 1st time
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keep on the good work _________________ Love might not always end the way you want but if you follow and believe in your heart, you'll one day find the right
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

Joined: Sep 20, 2005 Posts: 364 Location: somewhere out THERE
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:15 am Post subject: |
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thanks alot for the encouragement, i will continue to work harder.
Any places that i need to change?
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CGY Jigoku Sensei

Joined: Apr 30, 2005 Posts: 13130 Location: The depth of hell...
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice indeed! Good drawing of the lovely Nishino!
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thanks alot for the encouragement, i will continue to work harder.
Any places that i need to change?
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Well, shoulders, and arms need bits of improvement. |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 2:07 am Post subject: |
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which part more specifically?
pls give me tips on how to improve too as i just got Photoshop.
i don't really know hoe to use it...
sorry!!! |
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CGY Jigoku Sensei

Joined: Apr 30, 2005 Posts: 13130 Location: The depth of hell...
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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which part more specifically?
pls give me tips on how to improve too as i just got Photoshop.
i don't really know hoe to use it...
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The left shoulder from our point of view is a bit stiff, and the right arm is a bit too fat at the half. |
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haploz Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Sep 03, 2005 Posts: 63
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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| try adding a little shading and contrast of colours in to make it more 3d. nice work btw! keep it up! |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 4:43 am Post subject: |
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thks haploz
but, any tips on how?
i dun really know how to use photshop yet, so tips and tricks on how to make shadows and shading is very welcome and needed.
i will do my best, but before that, i need some info on how to first..
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1ce Retired Forumer

Joined: Jul 31, 2005 Posts: 9275 Location: Somewhere in CANADA
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Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2005 1:04 am Post subject: |
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| Heh thats pretty good for a first time. I've been trying to practise it with my other computer thats faster, but due to my colour blindness, I cannot get the proper tones based on skin and hair and... everything. My only perfect judgement are the lines. |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2005 1:58 am Post subject: |
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Thanks ICE,
i am doing another pic of tsukasa now..
should be up soon at the same album at zorpia.
pls go comment!!!
also, pls help me by posting tips on how to improve.
i especially need help in shading and doing shadows.
thanks all who commented.
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bedakilla Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jul 24, 2005 Posts: 51
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:32 pm Post subject: |
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| if this is your first time you did a really awesome job. I like it |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 1:54 am Post subject: |
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thks alot for the encouragement
much needed
working hard, studying jap now...
have to prepare for exams now...
thanks anyways..
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Natsukawa newbie!

Joined: May 09, 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 3:09 am Post subject: |
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Hi
This is a great pic, but it needs more work
Is this picture hand drawed and then scanned or full photoshop?
When scanned i have good experince with it i can help.
I see u dont use more layers....or not correct....by photoshop thi is a great feature.....this is a muss you muss learn howto use layers. Here can help too.
Coloring/shading.....hmm not too dificult but much more time consuming process...
coloring/shading have more diferrent ways to realize. I can help here too.
Firs i need a good translator
You can see my english is not the best
But if you need help i try my best
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Asianboysiam Heimin (Commoner)

Joined: Jun 05, 2005 Posts: 72
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:22 pm Post subject: |
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| *whistle* nice job dude looks good to me |
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jiashore Yari Ashigaru

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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:15 am Post subject: |
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thanks all...
uhm..natsukawa, this picture is actually the raw pic directly scanned, but no by me...
when it was initially scanned, it is already at low resolution, thus, the image quality isnt very good....
well, if you can help me, pls do... especially for shading.... i cant seem to do a good shade of any kind..
sorry
thanks again.
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