My Ceybrums

Takasan · Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 8:06 pm Post subject: My Ceybrums

Picture I did in 9th grade. Hope you guys like this picture more than the last. Sorry the color kinda faded away though. It used to be more darker. I've just scanned it up and started coloring. Really hard to color without photoshop or flash-too expensive for me. Crying or Very sad

so i'm using paint Embarassed

Any comments or suggestions are appreciated
-Taka
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sayoku · Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:18 am Post subject:

wow its really good, looks 3-demensioned as well! keep up!
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Jsy3k · Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:49 am Post subject:

Wow!! Nice sketch you have there. Nah, I like it like that, not too dark. Keep it up and hope that I can see your future art, Takasan.
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Natsukawa · newbie! Joined: May 09, 2005 Posts: 12

Hi

God pic, you have a great eye... but draw more more more Smile

And dont use paint....paint is a total low level program it is not for this art of work.
Try using Gimp---total fre prog and it has good features....

Bye

CGY · Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:50 am Post subject:

Well, the Gundam looks ok to me, but somehow the two characters seems to be a bit weird to me.

Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

The gundam is excellently drawn, but the characters have a little odd facial expressions, as well as proportions (why must she wear no bra? :'( )

Takasan · Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:21 pm Post subject:

Their facial expresions look wierd? Hmm..gotta check that that one. Very Happy

I personally found nothing wrong with the girl, but the guy's posture and facial expressions I found kind of odd myself. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll try to improve on those parts. Heh..you can't become a good artist if you can't critisize your own work. But most times you don't see it right away and it only pops out when your done with everything. Also I think it's much easier for other people to critique it for you.
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1ce · Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:36 pm Post subject:

The picture looks good overall, but the only big problem is the face of the male character. Its a bit off. The proportions of the human figures you don't have to worry too much about here.
The gundam model is great though. Nothing I see wrong with it.