Conclusion to EVA Unit 1 vs. Wing Gundam Zero Custom

TrueAncestor

BATTLE 1 : EVA Unit 1 vs. Wing Gundam Zero Custom

A desolate wasteland as far as the eye can see. Nothing but death surrounds this place. Ruins of a forgotten Utopia lay scattered around a desert of crimson sand. Black menacing clouds hang overhead, lightning striking repeatedly to the ground. Suddenly the ground splits open, and EVA unit 1 is prepared for battle. Then a laser cannon is shot, its crimson beam shooting through the onyx clouds towards the EVA. Suddenly a rift opens in the sky, and Wing Zero flies through the air, rushing EVA Unit 1 at the speed of sound. Unit 1 dodges the beam, and it crashes into a ruined building. Wing Zero repeated shoots its twin cannons into the ruin, hoping to annihilate the former angel before it can regroup. But Unit one side rolls out of the laser storm, and before Wing Zero can react, it goes down in storm of bullet fire from Unit 1's automatic weapon. Wing crashes to the ground, leaving a trail of feathers in the air. EVA Unit 1 takes advantage and rushes his enemy, his Progressive knife glowing blue, 2 minutes left of power left. Suddenly through the cloud of feathers emerges Wing Zero nearly unharmed. He dashes towards his adversary at top speed with his Beam Saber drawn. Unit 1 takes a defensive position, and waits for his chance to strike. Wing Zero reaches his enemy with a stabbing maneuver, and it connects with Unit 1's lower torso. Together they fly backwards into a tower ruin, and crash into the base, which brings it down on top of them. A cloud of dust covers the battlefield. As the dust clears, it reveals a downed Unit 1 lying amongst with rubble, Wing Zero holding his beam saber triumphantly. Zero prepares to fly away, but suddenly Unit 1 grabs his leg. BERSERKER! The deafening roar of the angel echoes throughout the wasteland. Unit 1 strikes Zero with a thrust kick that sends him crashing to the ground. Unit 1 charges once again, eyes full of primal destruction....

Conclusion

Suddenly a green beam of energy shoots out of the dust cloud where Wing Zero lay, and struck the EVA in the torso, causing it to topple to the ground. Gigantic angel wings spread through the dust, as Wing Zero flies through the air, firing his twin beam rifles repeatedly at the downed EVA. Beam after beam connects with Unit 1, and it seems as if every hit is dead on. Finally Wing Zero stops, and as the dust around Unit 1 settles, it reveals nothing. The EVA is gone. Suddenly, the Zero System kicks in, and indicates that the EVA will be behind him in 3 seconds. Quickly Wing Zero draws his beam saber, and slices directly behind him vertically. Wing Zero turns to see Unit 1's left arm go flying through the air, severed by the previous attack. Blood sprays over the wasteland, and the EVA cries out in pain, but seems to be unaffected. Unit 1 throws a haymaker towards Wing Zero's head, and it connects with a deafening sound. Wing Zero topples to the ground, but quickly regains it's footing to prepare for the next attack. Unit 1 rushes Wing Zero, mouth dripping blood and emitting a primal scream. Wing Zero lunges with his beam saber, only to be stopped dead in its tracks by the AT Field. Yellow waves of Unit 1's soul emit from the field, making an impenetrable barrier. But then in the blink of an eye, Wing Zero had vanished. Unit 1 looks around for his enemy, but sees nothing. It screams again, and begins to pound the ground violently, causing massive tremors that shake the ruins and make them tumble fiercely. A sudden flying fist to the face of Unit 1 sends it flying towards the ruins once again. Wing Zero rushes towards Unit 1's helpless flying body, reaching speeds of Mach 3. Wing Zero is now in front of the EVA, and makes a downward strike with his beam saber. The saber goes right through the Eva's head and torso, and is struck with such speed and force that the to halves land to the left and right of Wing Zero's position. A wind begins to blow in the ruins, causing a dust storm to emerge. Wing Zero walks over to his adversary's core, and pulls out his combined twin buster rifle. He points it at the still screaming EVA's core at point blank range, and the pilot says one phrase that echoes throughout the land: "I'll kill you." The trigger is pulled, and a huge explosion of energy consumes the land for a 2-mile radius. The smoke clears, and all that remains of the battlefield is a giant crater, with Wing Zero standing in the middle of it, twin buster rifle held in the air. Heeor Yuy, the quiet and serious pilot, rubs his face, and says "Mission Accomplished.", before Wing Zero's wings spread and jets activate, and it soars into the black sky. Silence rules the land again, as feathers fall quietly to the scorched earth.

post comments on this thread, not other one. ONLY constructive criticism, no rantings on how its bull crap that EVA lost or anything. the vote did it, not i. Rolling Eyes

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deadsnake · Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 1:08 am Post subject:

shikatta nai deshou... Very Happy

TrueAncestor · Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 4:32 pm Post subject:

thanks!

( i think...)
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CGY · Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 7:03 pm Post subject:

Interesting indeed... Nice work, TrueAncestor!

kaykay · Shogun Joined: Jul 22, 2005 Posts: 2622 Location: Cali

nice §weetz~! gr8 jobz~!

hurray Wing Zero won~!!! woo whoo~!
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Happy_Dojo · Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 8:04 am Post subject:

a nicely done fight....... i salute wing zero.
Mad

for now.......
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LOL-ness · Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:41 am Post subject:

haha... nice conclusion, although I think the fight will be better and more interesting if Wing Zero got a bit damaged by Eva-01 (like a broken arm or leg ... or something). Forgive me if it really did got damaged, I only skimmed through the passage, but overall quite well done.

btw, TrueAncestor, you said before that you have prepared two versions of the conclusion: one of Zero winning and one of Eva winning. Can I read the Eva winning version as well? =D

TrueAncestor · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 2:42 am Post subject:

thanks everybody!!! Smile

people like my battle... Crying or Very sad

im so happy...

leoxjm · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:19 am Post subject:

Oh, this was fun!!!! Excelent work. Can we expect another one? If so, when?

TrueAncestor can say "Mission Accomplished" too now... Very Happy

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1412kid · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:44 am Post subject:

Banzai! Zero won!^_^ Anyway, nice narration.

TrueAncestor · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:10 pm Post subject:

Happy_Dojo · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:04 pm Post subject:

yo trueancestor could you PM me the other ending as well
thanx. looking forward to the nest poll Very Happy

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leoxjm · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:06 pm Post subject:

Death_Angel-Decay_Flower · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 5:04 am Post subject:

big.but nice Twisted Evil

OrangeRage · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 5:38 pm Post subject:

psshhh of course wing zero would win. Almost anything can beat up the eva (even in berserk). Well, theyd have to be quick at least, and mostly of the ground.
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