Where the sketches go.

atikiN · Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 10:41 pm Post subject:

The bottom lip a tad bloated Wink

. I also think her neck is too long.

me8j · Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 11:22 pm Post subject:

Yup, I agree with others. All goes well except the bottom lip and the neck.
I like the eyes...
Smile

kenshin777 · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Nov 02, 2004 Posts: 78

don't listen to them =P ... it's all a matter of opinion and style

i think that the lips look fine ... they are stylized but they are done well

the only think i would say is that the eyes may be a bit too close to the edge of the face (aka. too far apart)

DrJackal · Jikan Samurai Joined: Mar 14, 2004 Posts: 979

ZoXArkXoZ that picture is good in my opinion, the eyes far apart and the big lip at the bottom adds to the style of that character.

ZoXArkXoZ · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:10 am Post subject:

Hey thanks guys. I've been experimenting with the american comic book style mixed with some anime. The large lips i picked up , and kinda like Wink

, from witchblade etc. Anyway the neck does seem a tad long (nuthing photshop can't cure). As for the eyes they are spaced a tiny bit too far apart but only a little so again photoshop to the rescue Very Happy

. I've also noticed that her pupils aren't quite centered so i have to do that as well. Thanks for the help guys!
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atikiN · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:58 am Post subject:

afu · Conscript Joined: Oct 25, 2004 Posts: 142 Location: Canada

that a great idea for a thread! ^^ if I can get to scanning stuff I'll post here with stuff that you guys hopefully can help me with. >w<;;

Let'see if I can be of any help with the last sketch. ><
First, it's a very nice clean sketch I must say XD My sketchs are always so messy... The lips may be a little distracting to a few but I dont think it's anything to be too concerned with, maybe just make it a tad longer so it even out the lips (sorry I suck at explaining these things!)

samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12971264/

VasH83 · Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 10:10 am Post subject:

Here is my drawing i think you know here here name is kusanigi form ghost in the shell.

she is bending a littel forward thats why the large shoulders
and and i have just seen a large error with here left hand. Confused

the Original drawing were on a Little bit pink coloured paper zo i made this drawing white with photoshop thats why the dirty looking paper. Wink

but i hope you like the drawing.