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armodon · newbie! Joined: Jul 08, 2004 Posts: 6

i've quit trying to beat cg's and have tried it for myself. this is my first attempt on photoshop so it isnt that good.

MiddleMan · Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 10:49 am Post subject:

In the second pic the character sitting on the curb, his face seems to be a little warped. Hard to explain but it seems like his forhead is prety big oh and his hands look a little wierd. Buit other then that I think they look awesome. I really like how the wings were drawn in the first one.

Keitarou · Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 11:02 am Post subject:

Both are excellent sketches. I'd love to see the ideas progressed a little further and see them fleshed out a bit more.
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samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

you have a very clean style but i would suggest adding both detail and shading to your work, shading being the most important Smile

the mask on the individual sitting on the curb has the eyes set too low, if he is looking down there is no other evidence of it in his pose. you have done the inverted legs well and i like the designs, may be include how long the piece took you and any future pieces you posty have taken you, and then we can crit a bit more Cool

keep it up, its class stuff and i expect some crit from you when i post my new drawing some time soon Smile

ZoXArkXoZ · Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 8:18 pm Post subject:

The lines are pretty good. However the pics lack depth. Ad more than one shade to the places that need it. Also, without pupils or a mouth the pics lack emotion so they just seem like stone figures and well.. dull. Add some color too. Hand drawn pics have to be really well done to compete against cg. just look at Tokiyama's pencil pic.

U have talent so just beef up those pics a bit more and u'll be set.
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samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

i didnt really like that drawing that won lol looked far too stiff to me and the right arm seemed very off. Though you can see the great skill behind it.

armodon · newbie! Joined: Jul 08, 2004 Posts: 6

thx for all the comments.
i bore very easily so i rarely spend more than half an hour (1 hour max) on any of my drawings hence the lack of detail. ill try to work on the shading in order to give it more depth.

zox you wanted a character with more facial expression, so here it is. i hope its to your liking.

samonmoose · Conscript Joined: Jul 04, 2004 Posts: 114 Location: uk

Iam the same m8 i never spend any time on my sketches but, recently i have started to take longer over my work and it does pay off trust me, why not spend a couple of hours on a sketch and give it depth then post it.

Thadeus · Heimin (Commoner) Joined: Mar 09, 2005 Posts: 50

I think there great but you should color all of them and do some more shading

LiangZzZ · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:02 am Post subject:

yeap, try colouring them and see the effects. They would definitely look better Wink

Zellron · Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 3:48 pm Post subject:

I think all of the drawings are good... keep it up.

Micro · Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:46 am Post subject:

Keep going! you can only get better!

chunky123 · newbie! Joined: Mar 19, 2005 Posts: 43

i think u sould put more colors in it and make it more detailed