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Sepherz · A-Source Staff Joined: May 01, 2005 Posts: 382

I liked the hair, and the face is kinda pretty - nice lonely expression.
Something bout her breasts (maybe how ridiculously huge they are) bothered me, though!

kevinchaosvs · Shogun Joined: Jul 28, 2005 Posts: 2551

CGY · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:14 pm Post subject:

Pretty good drawing! You have great talent, at least, at drawing girls! Very Happy

1ce · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:40 pm Post subject:

Hey, thats pretty nice, but could use some work on the proportions. I like how well the eyes are done. The most difficult part of drawing a character.

Takasan · Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:57 pm Post subject:

Pretty good. Need some work on the head and body proportions. Head seems a litle to big for body, but besides that, great job!(Keep the C cups)

kevinchaosvs · Shogun Joined: Jul 28, 2005 Posts: 2551

thanks

greydrak · Conscript Joined: Sep 04, 2005 Posts: 179

yeah, the head seem to be the only thing throwing off the look, if you made it smaller I think it would make it a bit less empty. That's just what I think when I saw it, features are great, just the face frame could be smaller.

Great work nonetheless Very Happy

Kaijiin · Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 6:01 pm Post subject:

that looks very pretty Very Happy

sad and lovely you shpuld make the head a little smaller i think

great work

xosarangx · Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 12:01 am Post subject:

that's pretty good. nice job.

basala · Conscript Joined: Jul 29, 2004 Posts: 134

I think th top portion of the head is a bit too flat.
It should look better if you can make it more of a round shape.

kevinchaosvs · Shogun Joined: Jul 28, 2005 Posts: 2551

Thanks ! i will work harder Laughing

blue_bee_pie · newbie! Joined: Oct 27, 2005 Posts: 11

i think the proportion are a little weird....but overall good job! Keep up the good work! Very Happy

hoangcong · newbie! Joined: Oct 19, 2004 Posts: 31 Location: Australia

yep keep practicing im sure youll do some greater stuff later on...
mmm for this picture you should level it a little bit next time before putting it here
good job anyway Smile

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meganekko · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 8:53 am Post subject:

Yes! The eyes are the easiest for me! I'm so used to drawing eyes, that they look the greatest~

The girl's pose is same like what I did, kind Emeraude-like (from Magic Knight Rayearth)

I draw some girls in that pose too! The hands are the hardest... especially the fingers!! Mad

So, great job! (^_~)v
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